I'm confident in my ideas, but my execution may be subpar. Please bear with me. Criticism is more than welcome. I hope you enjoy.
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I'm gonna write a prologue at some point that just explains a few things for world building. I realize that even though I want things to organically be introduced, keeping readers in the dark about so many things for so long isn't a good idea. I also want my world to be appreciated and not telling people about it doesn't allow for that. I'm gonna treat it as a side project that I do alongside chapters that I put out semi (hopefully more) regularly, so it shouldn't interrupt my already blasted schedule. It's 3:38 am my time so sorry if the chapter was a little rough. Going straight to bed right now.
Thank you for the feedback! I understand your complaints and I'll try to improve as I go. Though the story is still in its infancy at 11 chapters, so I hope you'd stick around to see my growth. :)