Dr_Dred
Write books for fun and for the readers. All criticism is accepted unless it's a half baked one that doesn't truly describe the story
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by controlling the media and limiting the spread of information between the colonies. during this time ONI did this quite often
No, the Sojourner-class dreadnought as mentioned before is a Forerunner Dreadnought with that usually equipped with a crew of One princeps, fifteen navarchs, and has a complement of Millions of hunter-killers or Despair-class fighters which are equipped with an ancilla or AI construct allowing it to operate unmanned. Yes they can be pilot operated but the UNSC doesn't have millions of pilots to pilot the fighters as such they are all left unmanned and controlled by the ships onboard AI.
Yes the Spartan II armor will be changed and introduced next chapter, as for the MCUs, they were in the battle, but I mainly tried to focus on the Marines and new Spartan-IIIs and also show that the MCUs can't be everywhere. And I didn't mention it but there is already MCUs used for other roles which I will state in the coming chapters.
Just read your reply, and I can see the making of an 1000 Chapter story, the reason why I don't like doing them is because I might run out of content but with the things you have stated I can see it developing into an 1000 chapter story especially with the interesting content that you have presented. The amount of content is great and I really appreciate it since as stated in my bio I mainly write stories for fun and for the readers. I was originally planning to keep it nice and short like 100-200 chapters but I would also like to see the first Star Wars story that has over 1000 chapters based solely in the Star wars universe. I'll jot down some of the things you said for the idea of the story as they are good and don't hesitate to keep them coming I appreciate all the ideas.
Thanks for the interesting paths that could be implemented into the story, but he is not skipping the Old Sith wars, The first part will take place during the Old Republic Era so about 100 or so Chapters maybe less and then he would enter a long meditation until about the beginning of the Galactic Empire. The Gen'Dai is something i can utilize as one of the many things to make up his character among other things. Obviously its still a work in progress and will change over time but I appreciate the story building you gave me which I could utilize in the story.
Just touched up on the story a little and now it will be based on the Old Republic Era for the first part and the second part will be based on the Galactic Civil War Era. Once I'm done with this Star Wars fanfic I will release that one with 10 chapters maybe sometime in the next three months or so.
Yes, but most stuff is being put towards military research for now but will eventually expand to the civilian sector as well.