Exceed21
Just a guy who's a writer for fun.
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Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThatAs if that's a bad thing ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"Hehehe, morning ki--" Karis puckered out her lips and pushed her face forwards, pressing it into Kurumi who was in front of her. However before they could make contact, Ren blocked her path with his hand.- Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThatCh 15 Chapter 15 - "So it was successful."
- Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThat
Not exactly. Unlike in his old world, he DOES have freedom here cause he has the power to defy whoever tries to shackle him. However, in this case, he CHOSE to follow his wives' demands because of unconditional love. (Also for the sake of plot progression. Ehe)
"Please! Ren, save those people. For my peace of mind," she implored. - Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThat
That's just her character. An overly naive girl who's willing to help anyone in need.
"No means no. I won't do it. End of discussion. You and your damn overly positive attitude, sometimes it's sickening," he said with a disgusted face. - Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThat"Ahh, well, I didn't really buy that stuff. The merchant gave it to me as a gift since I've known him for quite some time, however I really don't have a use for it. Me and my missus are already done with our sexual life, plus these hips are no longer strong enough for some pounding."
- Exceed212yrに返信 ItBeLikeThat
Hahah more or less the kind of reaction I was expecting at this part
"BOW BEFORE MY GREATNESS!" - Exceed212yrに返信 ella019Ch 1 Chapter 1 - "I am in charge"
- Exceed212yrに返信 Stressed_UltraCh 6 Chapter 6 - "Escort me safely to Sahnper."
- Exceed212yrに返信 Stressed_UltraCh 4 Chapter 4 - "My sole desire in life is to be by your side."
- Exceed212yrに返信 Stressed_UltraCh 3 Chapter 3 - "I beg of you."
- Exceed212yrに返信 EldritchBlade
Well, I just put what I thought was appropriate given the situation.
この段落は削除されました。 - Exceed212yrに返信 EldritchBlade
I see. Already worked on it. Thanks.
この段落は削除されました。 - Exceed212yrに返信 EldritchBlade
The chapters are their own big things. The acts act more like scenes in this case since they're very short on their own. I guess an easy way to put it would be Volume > Chapter > Act. In fact, actually working on the 2nd Chapter right now. Although thanks for the insight. Wasn't expecting a review within 24 hrs of release.
Ch 1 Chapter 1 - "I am in charge"