Darkphoenix

interesting plot and characters this story has potential and so far is going well. Keep up the good work

Boys

This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it's minor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!

Nope, definitely not.

Interesting

Thank you

As the story is still in its early stages, I can't say much more except that it's intriguing and it's being delivered well, by the author. The characters are likeable and the story is progressing nicely, so I wish you luck.

Thank you very much

This novel has good grammar and an interesting plot that is developing nicely. So far, it is a pleasant read and it's quite easy to understand. Well done!

The story has only recently started, so I can't say too much, but thus far, it's good. The plot is interesting, the grammar is simple to understand, and it has potential, good luck.