It was a good read, and easy to understand. The dialogues between the characters were always flowing. And really a sweet tale. And I highly recommend it.

I liked your writing, it makes me keep reading without stopping. The author knew how to develop the story well, and the character design. I'm not one to read fantasy stories but this one I highly recommend.

hmmmm... interesting

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I am still making improvements to the story. I will use your comment as encouragement.

Sorry for the delay in giving you a review. You have a good quality of writing. The way the author described the characters' lives, emotions, feelings and ideas, came very close to the reality we live in.

Fantastic! I could imagine all the scenery around.

I am very grateful for your review. I will strive to improve.

I am very grateful for your review. I will improve my grammar and spelling.