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NerdQueenQT10mthコメントI thought there were no windows in this thing 🙄
However, her sleep came to an end as the storm started roaring to life. Lightning illuminated the room.- NerdQueenQT10mthコメント
Ugh this story is so lame 🤣. I’d rather she didn’t fall for the cliche prince and just get revenge 🙄
Did he just… speak inside her head? - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
*steal the money
"Yes. But you if you still money you will be punish okay~? We are a proper organization now you know ~" - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
It is ”bottom”, it is a singular noun. The grammar of this whole sentence is bad.
"Cleavage? Did you see her bottoms? They are dreamy." - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
Yesss go for Luke go for Luke!
I turned slightly my head to see him 'wow there, you are too close'. With our noses almost touching I can feel niisan breathing. Looking at his face I can see from upclose his long eyelashes and that plump lips 'these lips are Too kissable'. - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
Isn’t it her mothers birthday? Not her birthday party?
"Your Majesties and Your Highness Thank you very much to grant us Your presence in my humble birthday party, I hope you have a great time tonight" - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
Not Leo! He’ s so BORING
Hearing the coughing, Leo quickly escape my clutches and is if chase by a ghost run out of the room. - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
I hope she doesn’t go with Leon. He’s ok but super boring
'I can't beat them, I can't beat them, I can't beat them, I can't beat them' - NerdQueenQT1yrコメント
Who wrote this garbage? ”woman parts?”… 🗑
She looked at her hands and noticed that this body wasn't hers. This body was taller, more scrumptious and definitely had bigger woman parts. She stared at her breasts and glanced back down her butt. - NerdQueenQT1yrに返信 heienzeya
- NerdQueenQT2yrコメント
indolent 9 times now. whyyy writer? whyyyy
In an indolent tone of voice, accompanied by an ambiguous smile, "That's the next question." - NerdQueenQT2yrコメント
indolence...8[img=faceslap]
His pitch-black eyes glanced at her, while his voice carried a tinge of indolence and amusement - NerdQueenQT2yrコメント
indolent again... 7 counts. my eyes!
Jiang Ran was wearing a white T-shirt casually paired with a set of black pants. His clothes were loose, and his stature was tall. A touch of indolence could be seen between his brows, coupled with that unrelenting evil aura shrouding him. - NerdQueenQT2yrコメント
need to find a new adjective besides indolent. it is pretty over used already and it is obvious for the reader because of how overused it is.
He was standing there, both hands in his pockets. The manner in which he wore his school uniform emitted an unruly and indolent vibe. - NerdQueenQT3yrコメント
This character Development is trash
この段落は削除されました。 - NerdQueenQT3yrコメント
Right? Just saying period drama means nothing to the reader
My bedroom? I blinked a few times before looking around. This looked nothing like my apartment. Again, it looked like something out of a period drama. - NerdQueenQT3yr発表
The writing is confusing and not a lot of background on characters. i stopped after the 3rd chapter because it was so confusing that I got bored.the main character seems to be not very intelligent and barely has any original thoughts. as a reader i dont care about her so if she died i would be ok with it. i gIve this story 1 star. and thats being generous .
- NerdQueenQT3yrコメント
I think the fIrst few chapters should be reworded. The time lines are confusing. Like her running the cabin and then her having no Idea how she got to tHe cabin? also there is no character development That Shows faye and her get closer but suddenly it says they do? The idea of this story is interesting but the writing is bad and needs to be planned out more
Ch 7 A Peculiar Dinner