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Butterscotch_07

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Hi, want to talk? You can find me at on twitter @Butters02911277

2020-10-12 入りましたAscension Island
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  • Butterscotch_07
    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Jo_J

    Thanks for asking. Belated Merry Christmas and New 🎆 🎊

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Jo_J

    thank you :) I saw your earlier comment too, about the help one. Thanks a lot for that too.

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 PrincessDustbunny

    it's kind of a fantasy world, but unfortunately, this is still a real situation in some areas... so how you take it is up to you :)

    He decided that she'd be hanged so that there won't be any black spot on their family name. 
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 PrincessDustbunny

    nope... Steven. what I meant was she was already there waiting when he was escorted by her sisters. :)

    At night, Steven was escorted by her siblings to her room. She sat there waiting as nervousness snuck onto her. She heard her husband ('her husband') getting teased by her siblings, heard him patiently answering each and every one of them and saying goodbye to them and the door creaked.
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 PrincessDustbunny

    Yup. There's a backstory. Wait for it ;)

    Serena looked at her friend, shocked. She couldn't believe that someone like him wanted to marry her. But soon Molly's words came true.
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 PrincessDustbunny

    No, I really appreciate the suggestions. I'll try to improve it... I'm a newbie after all, and I am here to learn. so, thanks.

    On such a pleasant day, a girl could be seen sitting lazily on a tree by the riverside. She had long hair that reached her waist and flowed lightly with the breeze. Slender legs were dangling from the branch that she was perched on as she sat there with her back leaning on the trunk. Although her face was half-hidden with the hat she wore, you could see the clear skin, an elegantly straight nose, and plump red lips half curved in a smile. A sound of footsteps was heard and broke her trance. She turned her face towards the newcomer.
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 PrincessDustbunny

    Thanks for your help. I'll try to improve accordingly 😀

    When they reached her house, there was a big crowd in the front. Being a village head's dwelling, it was nothing new for them to see so many people at the same time in their house, but this time it felt somewhat different. The visitors appeared to be from the city. There was an expensive-looking car parked outside her home. The person sitting with her father wore a suit and sat there looking elegant like a model. As soon as her father saw her, he signaled her to come towards them.
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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Alexandra_An

    Thanks 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Shionokami

    Thank you 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Alexandra_An

    Thank you 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
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    Whoa... creative writer Anyways, the story captivated me from the synopsis itself. And the start made me read more. The way you started with colors was really interesting. Eager to read more. Great work!! Keep it up :)

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    A mix of fantasy and modern world... I liked the story. The descriptions of places are nice. But I think you could do with some editing. Maybe shortening the sentences or changing the way they are written could help? Good luck with your story. Keep it up :)

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 chelsearaenavy

    Thanks 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 clydieM

    Thank You :)

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Smart_Dog

    Thank you 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
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    Loved the writing style. The flow is nice. It's fun to read. And some minor grammar mistakes, but you can improve those. Good luck with the story :)

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 ISOPALM

    Thank You :)

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Darlene_Virginia

    Thank you

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 _AiRen_

    Thank you 😀

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    Butterscotch_073yr
    に返信 Aella_Stormwind

    Thanks 😀

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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