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Smrtak32

Smrtak32

Lv2
2020-10-09 入りましたGlobal
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17.5h

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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak322yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    there is none, mainly because i broke my right arm

    Ch 12 The beauty of death
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    If he does get a differerent name in the future. It will be because noone in this world knows his name.

    Ch 12 The beauty of death
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    it could help him in fighting, but he is very emotional and very very angry at everything, not a rational state of mind. Not to mention he has split personality and etc.

    Ch 12 The beauty of death
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    read the begining, Last chapter ended with Jack saying "i have a whole town to play with" and this chapter started with how he was surrounded by dead bodies and how he masacred them all.

    Ch 12 The beauty of death
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    I wanted to put that in, but Jack had realistically no way to incapacitate her. Because the force he needed to break though the barrier would be too much even for him to stop it before it sliced her up.

    Ch 11 Last resistance
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    Sorry i have to study for really hard exmas, which will decide my middle school. It should get better after them, but now i write when i have the time. I'am going to try to make atleast one chapter per week, but that's only if I'am lucky.

    Ch 10 The dark hollow inside
    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 grok_moredakka

    Hi, I've rewritten the chapter 8's shitty end so if you thought it was as bad as i think i reccomend you to read the last 200 words again. BTW I wrote this in replies because i can't write something here without actually giving myself a review.

    Rise of the world ender
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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
    に返信 grok_moredakka

    hey thanks for the rewiew! I'am sorry that i didn't upload any new chapters as of now, but my friend came over for a week and then we had a power outage, so I'am going to write some now :D.

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  • Smrtak32
    Smrtak323yr
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    Neet writing but i dont see the Story yet.

    Ch 1 Reincarnation
    Sociopath
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