Ulric_Eclipse
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Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントRed Skull stretched out a finger and pointed tremblingly at the place where they disappeared, "That's mine, mine..."- Ulric_Eclipse2yrに返信 commander_pride_21
here’ s an exa mple
この段落は削除されました。 - Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントAs Gloxinia's second spirit ring started to glow, Basquias' spear form extended and grew bigger, forming it's guardian form.
- Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントAnd just as Carl talked God form started to change and it became a tall and buff man with blonde spiky hair and red eyes "You thought it was GOD.... But it was me DIO!"
- Ulric_Eclipse2yrに返信 ib_z
think of it as Sound sourcing
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*the
"uhm... probably nothing" Kaede answered, totally knowing what tge scream was - Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメント
lmao
Hashirama frowned at the question, but he gave a calm nod. "It was just to avoid him interrupting us-" - Ulric_Eclipse2yrに返信 TachibanaKabuki
+1
この章は削除されました。 - Ulric_Eclipse2yrに返信 King_KayKaito was accompanied by one hundred monkeys. He was holding a one meter long golden staff and a little cloth bag.
- Ulric_Eclipse2yrに返信 Rosier
yo be fair this is true ,as technically u can buy a self sustaining space ship with green houses etc.
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thanks for the chapter, I don’ tactually know much about Star Wars. I was looking for a fan-fic that could inform me generally and was also good. In conclusion, I was not disappointed, I love this story so far.I don’t know much but am learning since this is so well written. Hope you keep it up!
Ch 33 V.1-C.33│Progress II│ - Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントCh 30 V.1-C.30│Nanosuit II│
- Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントAuthor's Note: Part of this chapter is heavily influenced by "Around the World in 80 Days" by Jules Verne.
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yes
Tell me your thoughts, Does this look like a good read, Should I continue? - Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメント"That's for you being silly," Jax laughed as he gently wiped off the remnants of the ice cream from her nose. "MJ, I'm here with you, not those other girls for a reason. As much as you don't see it for some reason, you are very beautiful, and I like being around you. I love the sound of your laughter when you laugh at my lame jokes, and I absolutely adore the way your face turns red whenever something like this happens," Jax said as held softly lifted MJ's face and brought their lips together.
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I know this might be for looks but why don't you do this internally, this way he could have markings on his bones. If there are such things as mana circuits, or veins you can just make the marking there.
After everything was done Kaji had some tattoos on his body, Black colored one covered his wrists, they looked like circles made of flames. While one more was on his neck it looked like some sort of black necklace. Kaji had created black tattoos on his body, which will absorb mana from him and form the air around him. Now all he needed to do was wait for them to absorb enough mana, for him to travel to another world. - Ulric_Eclipse2yrコメントSuddenly, the eggshell burst into small fragments as what appeared to be a purple Final Fantasy chocobo emerged and immediately jumped onto my head, chirping cute sounds as it made itself a new home in my hair.
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I like it when the author does this, I applaud you.
It is at the author's discretion, and the story will never be compromised because of it. It could be stuff like Naming/Creating a Character/Race/Class/etc. If there is something you feel passionate about, then it would be cool to have it in the novel!