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Jimpaly

Lv2

Just need a place to get stuff from my head into words. https://linktr.ee/jimpaly

2020-10-02 入りましたGlobal
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33.4h

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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Good. Asian parents would be proud

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    My Vampire System
    ファンタジー · JKSManga
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Random thought- couldn’t he go to the medical center for them to heal him up..? At least it’ll give him more time to find blood

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    My Vampire System
    ファンタジー · JKSManga
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Probably a good thing since it reduces bullying which seems like a pretty big problem here...but it doesn’t look like it’s working

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    My Vampire System
    ファンタジー · JKSManga
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    I see you’re borrowing that style from Alanala 😏

    NOTE: << >>= System/Voice 『 』= Thoughts " " = Dialogue
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    [HIATUS] How A Bug Became A God
    ファンタジー · Raeven_Black
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Frik pls don’t remind me of that movie

    A Bug's Life
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    [HIATUS] How A Bug Became A God
    ファンタジー · Raeven_Black
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    But when the sun sets his shadow magic would be more useful, too, right?

    If I recall, his Spirito is a werewolf, and he himself is a Lycan. Now, I know that they sound like the same thing, but it's a bit different. Werewolves are basically wolves, but bigger. Lycans are humanoid. Now, it's the afternoon, so the sun is still up so he can't become a Lycan, but he can still activate his Spirito. When the moon rises though… he'll become much stronger and faster. And the sun sets in about ten minutes. However, I won't need much time. I'll beat him before the sunsets.
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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    ファンタジー · MonarchX
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    narcissist...

    Man, when I look in the mirror, I just think 'Who is this handsome fellow.'
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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    ファンタジー · MonarchX
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    I feel a really strong personal connection with Seiya here...

    I'm still stuck at 165 cm. I had stopped growing on my 14th birthday. I'm 15 years old now. Can I at least grow five more centimeters?
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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    ファンタジー · MonarchX
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Coronavirus?

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    The Paranormal system!
    ファンタジー · AJPaturde
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    に返信 griffin_gamez

    Hehe new chapter every day, so don’t worry, mate, I’m not intending on dropping anytime soon ;)

    Ch 40 Water Show
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    Time Walkers
    ファンタジー · Jimpaly
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    “You can’t escape from me twice!!!” Truck-kun blares out with his horns.

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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    ファンタジー · MonarchX
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    に返信 YoungMaster_MtTai

    Frik I swear I wrote Angel a few other times this chapter and had to fix it— this is what happens when you give everybody the same first letter for their name smh. Thx for catching it though

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    Time Walkers
    ファンタジー · Jimpaly
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Oh frik back to high school— this is the real horror

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    Between the Dark Pages (HIATUS)
    ホラー · meixiaolian
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    発表

    4 chapters in, and I’m enjoying the story a lot! The plot is just about to take off, so I can’t wait for the next chapter! From the beginning, the MC is a memorable and relatable character. And I can already see the tension’s rising after the huge change in her life. I’ll be waiting to see how she lives her life out :)

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    Accidentally trapped in Sweet Wonderland (HIATUS)
    若者 · meixiaolian
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Aaaahhgg I need MOORRE! Why just pretend to be his girlfriend?! The tension’s getting so high!

    Ch 4 Chapter 2: Nathaniel Clayton
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    Accidentally trapped in Sweet Wonderland (HIATUS)
    若者 · meixiaolian
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    Well at least you’re trying... don’t think I’ll ever work up that type of courage ;-;

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    Accidentally trapped in Sweet Wonderland (HIATUS)
    若者 · meixiaolian
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    発表

    So with Volume 1 (Seed to Tree) finally finished, I thought of putting my own (probably biased) review as the author. It seems to be a tradition on this platform. These first 26 chapters simply introduce the protagonist, Damien, and the concept of time traveling in this universe. The first half involves a bunch of world hopping, while in the second half, our MC settles down to train his temporal skills. In my personal opinion, I thought the plot was a bit all over the place in these chapters, especially with all the world hopping going around. Some people did tell me it was interesting though, so I guess it's fine. I promise you the world hopping will slow down in the future so that I can focus on describing each world in more detail. But really big thanks to Nyype, who pointed out some pacing problems in the latter half. I managed to expand 2 chapters into 8 to fill in the time skips :) For the characters, I tried giving them each their own personality. But one thing I must point out is: don't expect the characters introduced here (other than the MC) to be appearing much in the next volume. They will become important later, though. I also think I grew the MC quite a lot, especially in the later chapters. You'll see it once you get there. Next is world background. As I said before, I didn't focus too much on describing every world we visit in this volume. The last world, though, is pretty well described because of the long time we spend there, though there isn't really that much to say about it. Now the minor stuff: updates and writing. I updated this volume 3 chapters per day, but that was only because I had enough chapters stockpiled. For the next volume I will be going down to 1-2 per day. I put all of my chapters through Grammarly to check my writing. Some were even put through that twice. And I swear, I rewrote some chapters like 2 times. Also note that future volumes won't be this short. This one is only 26 chapters because it's kind of like an introduction/prologue to the rest of the story. Okay I probably went a bit overkill here but whatever. It's already written.

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    Time Walkers
    ファンタジー · Jimpaly
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    コメント

    This is some epic portal speedrun stuff lol

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    Seed Of The Stars
    アクション · Alanala
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    に返信 _MASTER_

    Maybe once he learns to time walk, he can change his pp size on demand

    Ch 21 Sapling
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    Time Walkers
    ファンタジー · Jimpaly
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  • Jimpaly
    Jimpaly3yr
    に返信 _MASTER_

    For now it shall remain a mystery... 😏

    Ch 21 Sapling
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    Time Walkers
    ファンタジー · Jimpaly
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