Time Walkers

So with Volume 1 (Seed to Tree) finally finished, I thought of putting my own (probably biased) review as the author. It seems to be a tradition on this platform. These first 26 chapters simply introduce the protagonist, Damien, and the concept of time traveling in this universe. The first half involves a bunch of world hopping, while in the second half, our MC settles down to train his temporal skills. In my personal opinion, I thought the plot was a bit all over the place in these chapters, especially with all the world hopping going around. Some people did tell me it was interesting though, so I guess it's fine. I promise you the world hopping will slow down in the future so that I can focus on describing each world in more detail. But really big thanks to Nyype, who pointed out some pacing problems in the latter half. I managed to expand 2 chapters into 8 to fill in the time skips :) For the characters, I tried giving them each their own personality. But one thing I must point out is: don't expect the characters introduced here (other than the MC) to be appearing much in the next volume. They will become important later, though. I also think I grew the MC quite a lot, especially in the later chapters. You'll see it once you get there. Next is world background. As I said before, I didn't focus too much on describing every world we visit in this volume. The last world, though, is pretty well described because of the long time we spend there, though there isn't really that much to say about it. Now the minor stuff: updates and writing. I updated this volume 3 chapters per day, but that was only because I had enough chapters stockpiled. For the next volume I will be going down to 1-2 per day. I put all of my chapters through Grammarly to check my writing. Some were even put through that twice. And I swear, I rewrote some chapters like 2 times. Also note that future volumes won't be this short. This one is only 26 chapters because it's kind of like an introduction/prologue to the rest of the story. Okay I probably went a bit overkill here but whatever. It's already written.

....Exciting. Please excuse my language, but- HOLY S%*T. THE MC IS SOLID, THE WORLD IS (currently a blank canvas), AND THE CONCEPT IS AMAZING. easily thrown in my library, but the current way things are, it makes me think the mc is gonna suffer more than me playing dark souls 3 HAHAHAHAHA

To be honest it's great everything is just perfect. I love it. The imagination here is really great. And while reading I can feel each scene happening in front of me. I am really blown away. Not really into these types of novels but this novel has grabbed my attention for sure.

Author, how..how could I describe your story that its toooo good :)) Reading the first few chapters, I like the way its written because they're detailed and can also let the reader visualize what did the character did. I also relate to the MC on chapter 2. keep writing

Honestly, one of the best book you will get thrilled. You will have goosebumps on early chapters, then meet with mysteries of time-walkers. I liked the characters as well as descriptions. I hope Author-nim keep its how its like ++++

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