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Alright fine, just for you I'll post Act III instead of waiting until December.
Okay, normally I would ignore reviews like these that is pure insult but I gotta ask: Is your knowledge of the English lexicon solely restricted to demeaning words such as 'pathetic'? You've apparently spent almost 4000 hours reading but you've only commented a handful of times and all of them are insults. Fascinating.
Maybe. Honestly Scientia steamrolls tho.
Hmm, I wonder why did the author include that part about Scientia appearing over a planet full of her other selves in 60th Move? I wonder if those other selves have any significance to a character who can manipulate souls and can construct anything by putting points into specialties. And now that character has just been given a whole planet worth of resources and infinite time. I wonder if this is a set up to something? P.S: It's called foreshadowing.
Why would I comment how cursed my story was under a very cursed post?
Longinus NP's weakening effect is drastically weaker for anything not divine in origin. If Kuku was actually a god she would be as weak as a human when Longinus invoked his NP.
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Longinus is as anti-divine as it gets. The more divinity an enemy has, the greater the depowerment. The only reason Kuku was only slightly depowered was due to her not having any divinity.
He'll be completely depowered in his spaceship form. And promptly fall out of the sky.
Kuku's power is being Kukulkan from fate. Stuff like super strength are expressions of that power, as such can be suppressed to an extreme degree. If her power was fully nullified, Kuku would return to as they were before they signed with the Company.
I asked around the Waifu Catalog discord and they said that debuffs are allowed. Beyond that, while you could make a case for corruption defense, it specifies metaphysical corruption. However, metaphysics is a HUGE field that includes everything from the soul to philosophy and existence itself. You could easily argue that character development become impossible since it'll be a corruption of that person's original philosophy. Thus I limited what is and what isn't protected.
It will be revealed next chapter.
If you bothered reading the Wikipedia article on 'SCP Foundation', you'd know that it's a collaborative writing project about a secret organization that is responsible for containing anomalous things that defy natural laws. Regarding the lack of SCP tag, have you considered maybe there is no SCP tag? As much as it may surprise someone who reads only the popular stuff, WebNovel has no SCP tag. About your critique of my style. You are literally critiquing every fanfic that doesn't bother explaining their world to their audience. Fanfics don't bother explaining their world to the readers because fundamentally speaking, the author expects the reader to be a fan of the original work. The only case that an author might explain it is if it's some fringe world-building of the original work especially with worlds that have complex magic systems such as Fate. Or if the author wants to pad the chapter for more words. If you know what Waifu Catalog is, then you should know how most long stories that use the Catalog are multiverse travel stories where the protagonist travels to alternate worlds. Given that, and how I have 'Currently in FGO Part 1' in the title of this story, why would you make such an assumption?
I'm going to be as nice about this as possible, because I could not fathom how people like you exist. It's an "SCP" Fanfiction, why are you even on here if you don't know what SCP is? It's like reading a Naruto fic and complaining why are there suddenly super ninjas that can use this mana equivalent of 'Chakra'. As the author, I expect the readers of this fic to have a basic knowledge of the SCP wiki, and so I chose only to explain what a Waifu Catalog is since I imagined not many would know. Beyond that, once more, this is a fanfiction. If it was original fiction then your last point would be valid. A fanfiction is written specifically for the fans of a series to enjoy. Basic understanding of the series are assumed.
Magnetic monopoles are a kind of super hax that literally causes physics to stop working in its surroundings. It's a topological defect/space-time defect that cuts through this physics nullification effect. Kuku's skin can stop a lot of things, but a topological defect ignores that durability. Kinda like the Flash's vibrating fist.