So, I read the first part and was shocked that she woke up and found out that she was in a novel. it is very intresting but you need to work on your description. Readers love when things are professional.

Wow

Your writing quality is really nice. But your novel can do better with the description and story development.

Shameless author review. This book is my first vampire book and I really want to give the book a chance to be seen so when you are reading, don't forget to vote and comment. Thank you.

Thanks hun