thanks, i fix it.

Thanks, I appreciate it. I'll go through all the chapters again to find the wrong one and fix it.

Thanks for the advice, i'll look it

my bad its must weapons not guns, thanks for it.

Thanks for the comment, i really like it

yes, i know, my english is bad, i know to talk but when write, the grammar still be my problem

wanna give me a recommendation words othen than daddy, dad, or father?

soon, the updates will everyday

Perhaps, for now there are no signs of that direction

Good story, this is one recommended novel for you. How a author makes a great story, it can take you into the world. good job author, enjoy it guys.

Hi, Guys. This is my first novel, there's still a lot of mistakes in it. I hope you can all enjoy it, and I hope you give me some criticism so I can make this novel even better.