wdym? like non organized or just weird

why doesn't he choose an evolution option, or is he too dumb to notice it has options?

adds an extra layer of defense to his already powerful physical defense

hell boy is a fire imp.

wolfs don't sweat. that's why they pant when they get hot.

I think your mc is garbage tbh. it makes no sense on why he acts like a squeamish girl. the violence he's been through from a young age should have made him insensitive to it. causing no reactions from him when dealing with violence or violent situations. I think you don't know anything about psychology. but it's your story to tell, and it's definitely captivating for readers.

in all logical since it's more like Stockholm's syndrome where the a victim falls in love with their abuser

before the original saiyans planet was destroyed.

hello readers, the author here to let you know that I am writing more. pls leave reviews, or comments on the chapter's.

why don't you say paws. instead of claws?

Way smarter, and more conniving. He’s also not as friendly as Naruto.

I love it great story. Really great art. Only thing I don’t like is that the pages are to short. I can read a page in less than 5 minutes..’

If you like it, give me your thoughts on what I wrote to help me do better in future chapters. Or could give me ideas on where to take the story. Ty for supporting the novel.

Glaives have a hook to pull riders from their mounts. And can come In different shapes and sizes.

I am writing the next chapter im just picky when i write so it takes me a long time because i want yo do good

May i Ask how you came up with your concept for the book? I really like it and would like to base a book off of the same concept like guide lines.

Thats awfully thin for a snake thats 13 feet long

Thanks for the chap

Release the dragons

If you guys want give me your thoughts on the book so far. this is just me experimenting and trying something new ik its Not good this is the first book ive written