Cryptic_werelord
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why doesn't he choose an evolution option, or is he too dumb to notice it has options?
adds an extra layer of defense to his already powerful physical defense
hell boy is a fire imp.
wolfs don't sweat. that's why they pant when they get hot.
I think your mc is garbage tbh. it makes no sense on why he acts like a squeamish girl. the violence he's been through from a young age should have made him insensitive to it. causing no reactions from him when dealing with violence or violent situations. I think you don't know anything about psychology. but it's your story to tell, and it's definitely captivating for readers.
in all logical since it's more like Stockholm's syndrome where the a victim falls in love with their abuser
why don't you say paws. instead of claws?
Glaives have a hook to pull riders from their mounts. And can come In different shapes and sizes.
Thats awfully thin for a snake thats 13 feet long