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Ferasight

Ferasight

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life can't make your choices you just do it yourself.

2020-08-30 入りましたGlobal
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  • Ferasight
    Ferasight18d
    に返信 Bob_Uchiha_XD

    Ok Gods a bitch I'm pretty sure everybody know that and the god he met is no different an arrogant bastard now what he did that a differnet Story and also what is this just A word another word and 1 star please Explain because I don't beleive I'm the first to use Gods as an extent

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    Ferasight18d
    発表

    My Reviews and position seem to have been deleted so I'll do this again after all I need to. First off I am a native English speaking none of my work is translate I've taken up older books that are hyper power books and Properly redone them in my own style not to take away from the author themself most of those translation works are MTL and abandoned My Stability in Updates is very precise typical Every 10 days if it change something must've happened or I went on break which usually never happens with this specific books My Story is really bad up until the most recent arc where I updated the pacing restarted the whole thing so the most concurrent Arc He is at the starting point. So the first expanse of arcs in tower of god back to the floor of test and filtering system as well as the starting plotline, since I restarted it I took a very different perspective to his power and how he'll become even stronger. Now For Character design I am very heavily Working on it, in fact I am in the process of setting up the currently introduced Harem remember I will not mention what i am doing but I am using the wiki to base some of my trait I just have to practice with the sentencing Schemes. My world building this is a fanfiction on tower of god however I have already expanded quite a bit on the world to a degree as it still in the beginning expanse. So In summary, I heavily change my approach to how powerful my character are he is now very powerful but also highly intelligent for the main Protagonist and his harem member are not just trophies I have yet to entirely introduce the characteristics I compiled to them.

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    Ferasight28d
    に返信 AbsoluteLoliLover

    well, I was trying to make jokes with the stats and mortal pretty decent at that for someb9dy that goes ridiculously high in level to the point stats just don't exist.

    Strength>STR: Mortal ]
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    Ferasight30d
    に返信 Ronald_Lawhorne

    well, techically skipping to the newest arc book is a good idea it's a restart of the whole series. Sig got owned by virtual jahad and manifested the crawling chaos

    'intermediate undead. The undead mark as intermediate is often more threatening alone than together. The Bone golem A golem made of reinforced bone as hard as mithril and enchanted with Spellcraft. They Destroy all who oppose their master with their indomitable Strength and vitality. incapable of learning. And have to be directed they always break even the Strongest of defence. Bloodgolem. Much different than the Bonegolem these golems are much smarter and often used as an enhancer. These golem's though only have weakly festering bleeding flesh Cast Spells using their own nigh immortal bodies They are only destroyed when their heart is pierced. They cast blood spells and control things as if puppets often housing many summoning spells. they are always surrounded by golems or Skeletons in some cases zombies but rarely as a single bit can change them into a Plague Golem. PLague golem is the most fear amongst the golems constantly festering puss that drips from their body like acid melting through any mortal creature as if it was butter in a microwave. They breathe out gases so toxic that even the souls of the dead can not handle them. Often using and manipulating it to create long-range attacks. The most threatening of the Intermediate. level of golems.'
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    Ferasight1mth
    に返信 Ferasight

    and ued I took march off writing

    Sig: the tower is not fair in the first place Headen should've explained this to you there is no law outside what the test administrator sets so I'm sorry this is normal. Blame it on your team if you're that fucking weak.
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    Ferasight1mth
    に返信 Ronald_Lawhorne

    probably cause it's really bad

    Sig: the tower is not fair in the first place Headen should've explained this to you there is no law outside what the test administrator sets so I'm sorry this is normal. Blame it on your team if you're that fucking weak.
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    Ferasight1mth
    に返信 BLITZ2

    your still here?????

    Ch 486 Avalon
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    Ferasight1mth
    に返信 Orixo7

    ya, I know. I've never been good with punctuation. That's why the three sentence paragraph method is a heavy crutch I use

    [Zombie Soul This is the Soul of a basic Zombie This Currency Can be used to buy soldiers supplies and with more advanced Graveyards Vehicles This item is gained from the Zombie Converter.]
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    Ferasight1mth
    に返信 reaper_of_lewdsect

    I didn't even know that existed at the point I was writing that, and even then, i only read like 3 chapters, then it got boring

    (Headen is old and well aware of what a chaotic entity look like though Sig is not a chaotic entity his soul is bound to the Necronomicon and is unaware of his other 2 wishes Unrestrained mind and infinity as such Headen was already on alert with Sig why because a chaos aura can not be completely hidden no matter how you try once something is tainted by the MC it will lose all relative to normal. And likely go insane exception being his women yes women he has multiple even if he doesn't want to he will sadly make a girl fall for him why because sometimes I manipulate characters personality to go with my PLot it's fanfic no it's not gonna be some bullshit 100 plus women fuck that too many to count and way too many names I do not have but it gonna be subtler though Endorsi might be an exception as she was already in love with bam by like comic chapter 150 was it I don't remember rereading it now.)
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    Ferasight2mth
    に返信 Antichrist_Sparda

    wait, then how did you write that ? Also, I kitterally call this chapter unsalvagable. I can't even figure out what's happening in it

    Ch 2 Condition unknown. [unsalvageable]
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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 ShadowRPD

    technically, yes, but I'm working on very thin ices with every one of the romances for his harem as in its none existent he's tried it, but it really inconsistent on my part.

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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 Jackleell

    haha, you gave up before reaching recent chapters. I did start rewriting it. The whole book got reset from recent chapters backward

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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 Dropletcloud

    ah no I'm having a seizure reading the same string of chapters over and over again

    Sig'THANK FUCKING GOD IT's NOT A WRITTEN TEST JUST LIKE THE WEBCOMIC'
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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 JudgeFate_18

    oh ya the plot for the starts almost as bad as my first book.

    Ch 22 Wasting
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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 Sabaroth_zarkiel

    that's a long way off friend he hasent gotten to a floor with a lack of privacy invasion that only happens after the fug incident.

    Ch 121 Dark dweller.
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    Ferasight3mth
    に返信 No_Internet_2853

    this is a fan fiction spoilers are to be expected even for the plot adjustments made.

    (trying as best as possible not to kill her right fucking here because she is a plot device she will vanish later.)
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    Ferasight4mth
    に返信 Jackleell

    ah, well, the story flows. It's actually pretty fine. it's just the writing so bad it makes it confusing. Though I will admit that when I was that amateur, I tended to skip over a great chunk of story bits to get to the juicy action. I was so confident in writing at the time. As for repairing it, the story from that point the beginning to now is so vastly different in quality that even I, as the author, can't figure out what i was thinking. sorry about the lack of quality, and I apologize if my past selves writing give you a headache so to summarize, the entire book beginning is completely unsalvagable because I don't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it.

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    Ferasight4mth
    に返信 Daoist452371

    no it sucks because one I don't do edits to prior chapters making it hard to even get to the chapter with proper English 2 it's a dumpster fire of ideas somewhat following the plot of tog and the characters are all as flimsy here as paper instead of being well developed since I was compressing stuff just to get through.

    "Sig Grab the Item from it as it finishes getting reel in."
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    Ferasight4mth
    に返信 random_re124

    you'll hate him later in the book trust me

    Sig:... not really if I was insulting anybody it would be Zahard He quite the tyrant yet he was to stupid to realize when his own love interested was infatuated with V
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    Ferasight4mth
    に返信 Project_Traveler

    no, just human stupidity and greed the warp isn't involved outside of the Warhammer universe human corrupt the ground with terrible machinery that polite everything and their sadistic tortures and inhumane experimentation.

    -A long time ago with this amount of corruption it's even mutated the area human. Live in it's almost like a goddam chaos entity decided to amplify the sins of man to extreme degrees. -
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