Ferasight
life can't make your choices you just do it yourself.
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My Reviews and position seem to have been deleted so I'll do this again after all I need to. First off I am a native English speaking none of my work is translate I've taken up older books that are hyper power books and Properly redone them in my own style not to take away from the author themself most of those translation works are MTL and abandoned My Stability in Updates is very precise typical Every 10 days if it change something must've happened or I went on break which usually never happens with this specific books My Story is really bad up until the most recent arc where I updated the pacing restarted the whole thing so the most concurrent Arc He is at the starting point. So the first expanse of arcs in tower of god back to the floor of test and filtering system as well as the starting plotline, since I restarted it I took a very different perspective to his power and how he'll become even stronger. Now For Character design I am very heavily Working on it, in fact I am in the process of setting up the currently introduced Harem remember I will not mention what i am doing but I am using the wiki to base some of my trait I just have to practice with the sentencing Schemes. My world building this is a fanfiction on tower of god however I have already expanded quite a bit on the world to a degree as it still in the beginning expanse. So In summary, I heavily change my approach to how powerful my character are he is now very powerful but also highly intelligent for the main Protagonist and his harem member are not just trophies I have yet to entirely introduce the characteristics I compiled to them.
well, I was trying to make jokes with the stats and mortal pretty decent at that for someb9dy that goes ridiculously high in level to the point stats just don't exist.
well, techically skipping to the newest arc book is a good idea it's a restart of the whole series. Sig got owned by virtual jahad and manifested the crawling chaos
and ued I took march off writing
probably cause it's really bad
ya, I know. I've never been good with punctuation. That's why the three sentence paragraph method is a heavy crutch I use
I didn't even know that existed at the point I was writing that, and even then, i only read like 3 chapters, then it got boring
ah no I'm having a seizure reading the same string of chapters over and over again
this is a fan fiction spoilers are to be expected even for the plot adjustments made.
ah, well, the story flows. It's actually pretty fine. it's just the writing so bad it makes it confusing. Though I will admit that when I was that amateur, I tended to skip over a great chunk of story bits to get to the juicy action. I was so confident in writing at the time. As for repairing it, the story from that point the beginning to now is so vastly different in quality that even I, as the author, can't figure out what i was thinking. sorry about the lack of quality, and I apologize if my past selves writing give you a headache so to summarize, the entire book beginning is completely unsalvagable because I don't remember what I was thinking when I wrote it.
no it sucks because one I don't do edits to prior chapters making it hard to even get to the chapter with proper English 2 it's a dumpster fire of ideas somewhat following the plot of tog and the characters are all as flimsy here as paper instead of being well developed since I was compressing stuff just to get through.
you'll hate him later in the book trust me
no, just human stupidity and greed the warp isn't involved outside of the Warhammer universe human corrupt the ground with terrible machinery that polite everything and their sadistic tortures and inhumane experimentation.