No it's fine! Don't be sorry! It's all cool. XD

and actually if you have any suggestions later on that you'd think that would make her seem like "a better mafia leader" than I'll be more than happy to take those suggestions. This is my first time ever writing a novel surrounding the mafia. I did it for a contest, but im still going even after the contest is over. It's a learning experience for me, so if you have any suggestions then im all ears. :)

Well actually if you keep reading you'd understand why she won't give him 20k. Ace is the type of person where she doesn't feel like she owes anyone anything. She might have her merciful moments, but she has a reason for everything. The reason why she didn't give the money to him is later explained and it's also a respect thing once you find out why she didn't give him the money. She's not just gonna give some guy money because he demanded it and threatened her. She isn't weak like that. She puts whoever tries to tell her what to do in their place.

nope Ace is the girl

I love how unique the characters are! They are all different and stray from real world characteristics. I love the flashbacks and the background information that's given in some chapters. Future_M_Animator really knows how to make the reader connect the dots to help further our understanding of the plot. I'm liking where the story is going!

her attitude is everything XD

Wow I wonder what's actually happening! I can't wait to find out why he's there and who he is!

Omg, I love her already

OoOOoO I'm hooked! I'm happy I found time to start reading your book! I'm liking it so far.

This story...this s t o r y ! I do not have words! It spiked so many emotions I..I just don't even know what to say. It got better the more u go and it's just a roller coaster all together! I love it!!!!!