Why can’t the Mc ask for some thing like other novel powers or movie or comic powers I feel like you writer copying original novel and modifying it I don’t it’s of fanfiction it feels like modified or Au of original novel

Not ultra but ultron

Atleast keep this ultra from being evil I guess all the readers here have twisted mindset to accept evil or antiheroic Mc

You said you won’t do crossover then why omniman?

The Mc didn’t feel sad or angry for the man who committed suicide then we can say that Mc is good person I guess by Mc’s reaction he is slowly becoming unempathetic or anti heroic please correct me if I am wrong

Very good I hope Mc will not be like a weak man I hope he is outstanding than the Billy butcher boys group or else it will look like pretty laggy story but till now I like it thank you👍👍👌

Why Mc is hugging shields agents thigh he should be involved in main plot but your form of writing is good 👍but Mc is overdramatic please don’t make him like deadpool it is disgustingly bad and please make Mc little bit colder I mean don’t show every emotion outside

Buddy it so confusing but I like Thai iniative of proper boys novel fanfic but can you upload more chapters daily

I think you all people are laughing but here the Mc is not a good person I guess we can add antihero tag I don’t know if it is added already

So it is not Kant it is Kang

But Kant also played in shaping Loki’s destiny why did he blame Loki are they both Mc and Loki same as Mc is much more selfish and hypocritical than Loki

Bro I don’t or I think any of your fans mind using techniques like opm because water crushing rock technique it is acceptable and also if you incorporate other techniques which are not supernatural it is and will be acceptable

Bro I am not criticising you I genuinely liked this novel I hope you continue this novel and I also have some suggestions like don’t do Crossovers it may no it will definitely spoil the flow of the story it will create chaos if you wanna write novels on movies I suggest you opt for non supernatural or sci-fi movies or tv series but they should have action on the basis of our novel writing skills this is my suggestion I hope you continue doing this good job 👍 and keep it up 👍

If you upload family drama please upload more chapters as this drama bores this novel because it is an action fanfiction I am not saying no drama but make that family drama and love story decrease its size

You did it harem I guess story will go awry

I think Mc here is again like cold Chinese Mc with no empathy only crave for power it’s very disgusting

I hope you update this awesome novel frequently 👍👍👍👍

Please don’t crossover to anything it will spoil the whole plot points it will get mixed up so focus on Dc and complete Dc plot then you can again make Mc travel to other multiverse though some spac time. Wormhole or something etc so PLEASE DONT CROSS OVER TO ANY OTHER ANIME ,MOVIE, COMIC ETC AND PLEASE DONT ADD HAREM THIS PACE IS GOOD AND IT HAS GOOD TECHNICAL ASPECT AND ALSO DO SOME RESEARCH ON BIOLOGY TO MAKE THE PLOT LOOK REALISTIC AT PRESENT IT IS 👍 👍👍👍

Awesome buddy but can you increase the size of chapter 👍👍

I liked this stuff but include more technical and biological terms but don’t over do it as it may spoil the word count means it may make the chapter lengthy and boring and can you please upload more chapters per day BUT I LIKED THIS CHAPTER 👌👌👌