This is a great book with so much potential! it's so different from the alpha books out there. Keeps me on the top of my toes! I never was intrigued by most of alpha but this one gives you a different vibe.

as with his other books, the writer of this book comes back with an exciting new entry - My Robinhood System! I can't wait to see what twists and turns he will bring to his newest creation. you have my full support!

A very interesting read . Unique premise and good grasp of grammar and vocabulary. Keeps you on your toes to see what happens next. Excellent job!

interesting book and suitable for teenagers. well described and great pacing, without making me bored when I read.. definitely a good read..

大周有七天，great name for a book!! keep updating seven days a week. sorry if my review didn't make sense but I had to do it!! 大周有七天 大周有七天 大周有七天 大周有七天

the story deserves a 5 star review for sure! from the beginning I was intrigued by the vicious descriptions. characters are well fleshed out and I can't wait to find out what happens next! love that it's set in Japan and thus an Eastern setting. Gambatte, author!

lovely start!

The author has a great writing style and the chapters are well paced. I loved the beginning of the story! it was intriguing for me to learn about Cassidy's life before the tragedy. love this book!

writing is very good and suitable for a teen novel. however my advice is not to keep paragraphs too long as it's hard to read for app users. a great book and hope you find success in it!!

okay. I've deleted the chapters now.

hi, just saw your message, it's yuchensky#9155 I think.

which title change? the "deleted story"?

thank you. I think it's my style, whenever I tried incorporating descriptions I overdo it, that's why I ended up sticking to my own style (ie not using descriptions). maybe I'll get to it eventually with more practice! thank you for your honest opinion!

let's all be shameless xD

An interesting book with a promising storyline. I love how this book is not one of the cliche genres - werewolf, CEO, mafia lord etc. the language is simple and easy to read. I didn't realize I was already on the 4th chapter, I am really hooked. The story has a great start as well. a masterpiece in the works.

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just the first chapter, and already have a good gist of what the novel is about! I'm invested!!

This book is hilarious! as a mature female reader, didn't give me the "it's for guys" male vibe of system books. The plot is also very creative and unusual. Reading more for sure. Keep it up, Author!

thank you!! to be honest I've been almost a year off webnovel and I'm not sure if my writing skills have gone rusty! I'm now experimenting different plots and styles, trying to see which one I can go with! thank you so much for your help!!!!

thank you for coming back to a second book of mine! this is an idea I had since my secondary school days, I've revised the plot so many times. I hope to keep the story as free as possible. I'm so excited by your comments! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] if you have any comment or opinion, do let me know!!!