What happens next!?

I love the story and the characters, and I am certainly waiting for the next chapter or part. But I have been waiting a very long time and am starting to lose hope that there will be a next part.

Me too

I really like your book

A very entertaining story with my favorite mythical creatures. The plot is fun and the world is very creative. I can't wait to see how the story develops.

Wow

What a unique name for a dragon.

Nice, it would be cool if you could add the perspective of the main character. From what I've read she and baby dragons so everything around her must be rather large. If you know what I mean. But very good, love the plot.

It's not a bad start. Very entertaining but could use a little bit more editing. Some spots didn't quite make sense with the word choices and punctuation. But I can't wait to see what happens next.

It would make more sense if you said "I took deep gulps of sharp, cold air" Instead of using the word "sharply" To me anyway, it makes more sense.

I agree loved the greedy chick's

The story is very entertaining and I am very interested in finding out what happens next in the upcoming chapters. I also can't wait see how the main character develops throughout her adventure.

Wait thats it wait happens next, the cliff hanger. I have so many questions.

thanks for the chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.

I wonder what significance the water prison has to the character.

damn why the cliff hanger, well gotten keep reading now.

This is really good

Omg, lol

Confusing, but I agree

hmmm