Josh_Corder

i usually dont like multiple lovers as its hard to give equal affection and unrealistic to be able to but when its only two or three depending on there situation and makes sense it is reasonable in my mind i have read a few were it was a huge one and it made some sense but i would always think how any one could spend enough time with them to keep them invested in the relationship that didnt involve mind control or some other nonsense as anyone in a relationship knows it need something to keep the interest after years and after 3 its exponentially more difficult unless there all having fun with each other most of the time and then that could lead to more problems later sigh its only ment for fantasy then made real like kings of old harems they would cheat and sleep with guards or some such and then there kids would end up fighting for throne or killing each other for whatever reason sigh like i said hard sell for harem with me but not 2-3 is doable i am more okay with two then more so meh keep up the good work i haven't had any problems with novel so far

.. .. .. no one really guess i will

yeah like i said idk if its just me as i cant place what feels off need an expert to tell if its just me or if there is something its still good so meh as long as someone actually finishes there story and not drop as its a big problem on here seems like just when the story gets good the authors like meh peace out i done feel like its full of trolls trying to start some new fetish or something lol

Good read thus far keep up the good work there does seem to be some forced drama but could just be me hating the whole run away in a argument and not hear the whole story is she would just have a good conversation with her sisters and tell them what she has seen and how she felt being thought a squib till she got her letter and how she seen her mom try to kill her when born and need mind wiped of it i am pretty sure they would just leave her fate to well fate for that BS even if it was postpartum or w/e she clearly doesnt love her as far as i could tell but mc just seems to forget about it and not say anything or think anything about it and i call BS she should be more prone to outbursts at her age as she is a teenager after all seems none have that time of the month in the wizarding world BS there are only two things in life more unpredictable then a teenage girls emotions that time of the month and a pregnant woman emotions so....... none of that seems to be taken into account with female MC i guess Writer would have to be male and never had a girlfriend or had kids with one as i have had to kids with my ex and i have some stories of some of my friends experiences to know this unless there is some magic or potion that negates the effects that i doubt it would dull emotions from hormonal teenagers So in a nutshell MC doesnt feel fully a hormonal teenager shes more of a emotion less doll unless plot... maybe idk but it feels off somehow all the other char seem ok and dont give me this feeling hell even Lord Weasleymort feels right and thats saying something if the fact that im cool her staying in the story and prob the dark lady the prof was just about just turn her into harrys wife and kill off moldyshorts as no one likes him says alot when i think hes better as a dark lady then lord sigh now that he finally knows love as he so put it a few chaps back any ways as i was saying all chars but MC feels good and acceptable but MC is missing something and i cant quite place what more emotions or thought/feelings about some things that get glossed over there acknowledged but then forgotten or something i dont know if its just me and i am putting myself in there shoes or something someone that gets to this point let me know and keep up good work anyways not many make it thus far with out dropping

i still think natural course is best with kushina around there shouldn't be a problem shy or fiery we shall see

i would say nope thats your future wife unless you dont want your future kids to be born it would be best to be friends until later maybe get her out of being shy but that wouldnt be Hinata that we all know so meh just leave it or not just no grooming and wait for a few more years grooming is disgusting let nature take its course

best ever said what thrice for added affect i could picture it as a scene in a show

that reminds me some one should write a combined world with this hotel Transylvania and a few others that could work combined there is a few neutral worlds like marvel to expand story as into a larger world as Wednesday world isnt very detailed for long stories based in the usa sabrina teenage witch/charmed could work just to add more of a world to it maybe a few other i cant think of at the moment

wow fuck maybe its his simp personality and so now he pissed off his 12 year old friend he can no longer do things he likes because some little shit will get mad what in the fuck so what if you lose track of time enjoying your sparring match what the little shit cant come and watch while you are there and who the fuck is that invested in a relationship at 12 and there not even dating . .. .. .. .. ... ... ... .. .. ... .. toxic drama for no reason

no stupider harry would be doing everything Ron said she is at least half right about what to do about most things her only problem is to much trust in the adults and they dont have there best in mind most deferred to dumb as a door and he is a greater good fanatic so meh and as they say happy wife happy life and sex is a very good stress relief when always on a blades edge between life and death so unless he goes around shagging all the girls he should get one for himself asap as no one wants to live like that with nothing to look forward to she could even use it as a reward to get him to study more as he doesnt seem to at all to realize more knowledge cant hurt and just stays stupid with out trying as ron made him super lazy and mostly used one spell all 7 years like wth just expel and stupify is his go to like what he should be like the only person ever to learn 2 spells and defeat a darklord that knows 100 different ways to kill him if he wasnt so full of himself he could have quarlmort poison him or curse him in first year or even use basalisk first year to distract school while he got stone and then kick ass or something sheesh he is more if a luck wizard then the int/wiz wizard should be just saying simp wiz harry is way better then lazy wizard harry