star_dreamer
An avid reader. Interested in learning and growing and following the star shining for me. I would be eternally grateful if you give any of my stories a chance.
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It's fine tho, cause those are the exact reasons we love you! Princess Neoma!
First, great summary. Really struck a chord in my heartstrings. The story is amazing! It's got a very detailed science fiction feel, makes it quite interesting to read cause the detailing is not too much, not too less- just right. The conversations are good and realistic and scenes change smoothly. Good job author!
I think this is a legendary story. Flawless writing, details aptly described and made to understand easily. The plot moves smoothly and seems to be very interesting from what I understand after reading as far as I have. If you've stumbled upon this story and wonder if you should read it, then, yes. Do give it a try, you'll like it. Great job author!
She played you like ping pong brother!
This part and the next para seem incomplete to me. Please edit these parts a bit author.
The story is so lively. The mention of pandemic reminded me of our situation. TAKE CARE EVERYBODY! Alright, so this story is a transmigration story where the Lead goes to a magical world after death in her previous one. That's pretty common. But, the author's plot sure seems not. So read it to find out what's new and different. It's a very engaging story with great potential. Good luck author!
What is with these boys and their urge to bully someone to grab their attention?!!
I understand. No worries, I didn't take it badly or negatively. Was just curious. Thanks for sharing.
This is seriously very different from the usual system type stories that I have tried before. The MC is exactly how the author described him in the summary- self-centered and a narcissist. Author has great sense of humor, that's for sure. Every chapter will leave an uncontrollable tickle in your tummy. I wonder if and how the MC will gain his handsomeness back, which he was so sad to lose. Good luck with this story author! (The large amount of swearing in this story did make me uncomfortable and it also felt a bit much, like it was appearing so many times it began seeming unnecessary. If possible please try to be more innovative regarding this aspect author. I do understand it's part of MC's personality trait but still I personally feel it can be made better.)
May I ask why? It's not a problem or anything, just am curious as to what made you think that.
I must say, this novel is different. There's a new concept here, a very well-thought plot and magnificent writing. If you like supernatural, mana mage story you should try this one. You might like it. The summary is quite good, and the cover is spectacular. Author has provided with an excellent story which certainly deserves more attention. Great story!
Thank you for the amazing review, and I'll take careful note of the mistakes you pointed. I really missed them. I am glad you liked this story. Your words really mean a lot. The change in POVs is because I am not writing from characters point of view but from mine, a third person's to retain the mystery and show how the characters are and how the plot unfolds instead of telling. I hope I am managing to do a fine job, don't really know cause I am a real amateur. POVs are hard to decide. Thank you for reading!