why does it hurts so much
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my venom??
there are signs of it in the in the first 100 chapters, like there are 2 young girls who were kind of forced to live with the mc and all the noble ladies having a crush on him mind you a 14 years old boy. bur after chapter 200, he starts having intercourse with different girls who all have a crush on mc for some reasons (around 11 girls so far in the story)
that's a drastic change which will doom the human race to extension over some lonely and bitter person who has fantastical hatred for themselves and others.
lol, true, that's because most fantasy webnovels and novels are written by teens, lonely young adults or male adults in the autism spectrum. at least the insane ones are more preferable than the perverted ones imo.
ok after reading further, this story is a full on harem, idk why the editor or translator didn't add the tag!!? if I knew that it would be a harem I wouldn't even read this
Cons: 1. while the story starts promising with a rather decent world building. However, the development has tons of issues. examples: I.too many assassination attempts for very minute reasons like bumping shoulers, the mini arcs development is like going from one assassination attempts atc to another for story to develop. II. too many love intrest and potential harem in the future, most young and old ladies have a crush on the mc specially as the story progress, like atp of story at chapter 200 there are more than 7 females that love mc for no or very small reasons whatsoever. 2. translation it starts as a decent translation but by each chapter the quality of translation is getting worse, such as constant switch of pronouns, constant switch of 1st and 3rd person, mc calling himself plus in his internal monologue as "lord rein" instead of "I" or just "rein". 3. pacing it's abysmal, it's either too fast or slow as a snail pace, thus giving you a rather frustrating and unsatisfying feeling even in cool moments where readers should feel satisfaction. I would recommend this only if you have nothing else to do, and want to waste some time.