Kevin_Valentin

Ik this is a translation but can you please fix Kalluto name it's a bit disorienting reading Kurt knowing it's supposed to be Kalluto

I wasn't sure if I'd like this story the concept seemed kinda meh but dang did it draw me in. Normally mash up worlds get overwhelming and fall off but this is a good way of tackling it one franchise at a time the kc also kinda draws you in which tbf it's probably because he feels like a more tolerable Gilgamesh personality wise they feel like Caster Gilgamesh which is still a bit arrogant but tempered by wisdom. Next thing I know I binged this entire story over the couse of two days 😭😂 needless to say I'm glad I gave this story a chance

Bit sad it the mc doesn't follow the Zoldyck naming convenction where the last two letters start the next ones name but besides that so far so good

The start was kinda shaky and at first I wasn't sure if I'd like it but I'm glad I pushed through It kinda sucked seeing the mc try and avoid the plot but I completely forgot about his deception ability he lies to himself that he doesn't care when he cares the most this story is definitely worth reading if you give it a chance

Oh ok like I said I only looked at the overview haven't watched it so like she becomes a god or something and she does this by uno reversing Kyubi?

This story made me look into the series a bit just so I had an understanding and kyubi gets energy from despair of magical girls but what if some being on kyubis level fell into despair surely that would grant the most energy and it would hopefully prevent Manakas sister and the other magical girls from losing everything

I liked the name blaze better

They'd really do anything for each other it's just one is a schizophrenic tsun who won't admit it

Story isn't bad at all then again I'm a sucker for Spider-Man but I do have a few gripes. I get that they're teens but things seem to regress way to rapidly the friendship becomes strained like the instant Peter gets powers. He isn't even doing a good job of deflecting people from coming to certain conclusions they just seem to dismiss them themselves. Also Harry seemed a bit more angsty than usual he typically doesn't get like that til stuff goes really wrong and Peter kinda comes off as a nervous wreck in the beginning. Lastly organic webbing which...ew. I've always liked when Peter designs it himself it shows his intelligence and ingenuity that he's more than a hero but a genius and a resourceful one at that. Despite these complaints the story was pretty decent overall and definitely has potential but it's still definitely early and can improve

You're right this chapter was so peak😭 too wholesome my blood sugar is too high