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The writing quality has gone massively downhill. Formatting issues prevalent.

What happened to this novel? It shows 0 chapters.

There's something about the phrase "I am Doom" that just gives me chills. Good novel so far. Keep up the good work.

Very good so far, good job. Looking forward to what you can do within this world.

So far so good. Hope you carry this on and don't drop. Good grammar and personality building.

Interesting so far. Looking forward to see some flashbacks/how he got to this position as well as how it fits into the DxD universe and plot.

It's good so far. I like the dynamic between characters and build-ups. Hopefully it remains to be good. Good job. :D

ivy and daphne

Decent story and crossover, kept me interested. Only issue would be the grammar. Would be better if you go through each chapter with Grammarly and clean them up.

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