dump it here and patreon info pls

Wrong book bruv

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Again, thanks for your support. I tried different versions of this chapter but each one felt worse than this. I know the system has super long dialogues but that's the only way I found to coherently explain a bunch of the background stuff that I'll develop on further. I just needed to get it out bc it was living rent-free in my head and bothering me.

Thanks for giving it a shot. I'll try and see if I can make it smoother. I kept the POV thing bc I like stories with multiple POVs and I plan to add a few more characters integral to the plot later on. Adding it suddenly later on might be a little jarring so I figured I might as well do it from the beginning.

this was honestly a great story. it's a little more fast paced than I'd like but good nonetheless. Apart from a few typos here and there the writing quality is pretty solid. hope you write another one soon. Cheers.

Bruh, I was honestly just blitzing through random fan-fics since I was bored but I had to binge this in a single day. Great Job mate. Hope you can upload more frequently bc I need to see this thing to the end and have the patience of 2 year-old with ADHD. I look forward to the other stuff you write. Cheers.

This novel is so badly written. Maybe you work on the grammar and editing since you're clearly a genius. I look forward to your Pulitzer prize-winning works.