PeterGriffith
"Wisdom has been chasing you, but somehow you are faster." -
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PeterGriffith21hコメントpredictable that it would... like why wouldn't it be S rank
He elaborated, as our smirks twisted into thin lines, "A seemingly harmless C - Rank mission turned most certainly S - Rank. No Genin, with me as their Sensei or not would have managed to get as far as we did, let alone survive and accomplish as much."- PeterGriffith12dコメントCh 3 Chapter 3: Dungeon!
- PeterGriffith21dに返信 AbadomCh 289 Belthane And The Spring Of Life Part 2
- PeterGriffith22dコメントCh 289 Belthane And The Spring Of Life Part 2
- PeterGriffith1mth発表
This is just sad, the first chapter had me, but 2nd to 8th lost me. The author is unresponsive to anything or anyone I honestly dont blame ya for it, you should have also added in the synopsis that it's a tag along with Rimuru. and honestly for someone so powerful it could have been a stand alone for his own adventure but you do you, Just disappointed that it turned out like that.Writing: 4 starStory dev: 2 star just a rehash of the Original with a strap on of OC.Characters: 5 star it's artoria what else can I say.Update: 4 starWB: 3 star
- PeterGriffith1mthに返信 tyronxxz
why are you always mentioning spiderman this and that? is he that integral in the story?
Unreal Speed: Although Nemesis seems like a heavy and slow being, he can run as fast as cars, maybe even faster. (Evolvable)] - PeterGriffith2mthコメントCh 46 Battle of New York Part 1(Edited)
- PeterGriffith2mthに返信 EndOneXDIn this world where gods gave blessings to mortals on a whim, it was a wonder why they didn't deal with it. Actually, it wasn't wonder at all. Gods seek one thing, and one thing only, Entertainment.
- PeterGriffith2mthに返信 Martian_Fridge
yeah, just showing a paragraph or two of him training himself or just about to finish. Instead of a sentence of "oh yeah I put bricks in my shadow" ain't that just lackluster? just a paragraph or two would suffice so readers wont get bored of reading him training. I kinda forget sometimes that WebN doesn't really have writing like AO3 or RR so I forget to lower my standards.
...That was around 25-30 pounds worth of Bento. I estimated according to the weight I felt. - PeterGriffith2mthコメント
0 feats, 7 kamikaze attempts
My gaze turns serious as I tilt my head to look at him. "We are going to lay some ground rules. The first thing is that attitude needs to go. Second, we are going to talk about your tenth Shikigami. If you can utilize your cursed technique, you'll become a walking calamity. However, if you don't do anything, all you will ever be is potential man." - PeterGriffith2mthに返信 NimtheWriter
- PeterGriffith2mthに返信 unit_201
so... when's the next chapter?
Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed. - PeterGriffith2mthコメント
nope, I've seen it done 6th time I think? maybe more.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the only FGO fic that has ever destroyed a Grail. - PeterGriffith2mthに返信 unit_201
Then why did he choose her of all the other characters he could have chosen? that's kinda dumb to begin with ain't it?
Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed. - PeterGriffith2mthに返信 Outer_God_AzathothCh 4 When People Breaks.
- PeterGriffith2mthコメントCh 5 The Mothership
- PeterGriffith3mthコメントCh 1 First Encounter with Bandits