EinsamerWolf_666
Lv14
2020-04-18 入りましたGlobal
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EinsamerWolf_6662dコメントthe eyes remind me of sid
[Kurowashi Image (in Discord)]- EinsamerWolf_6666dコメントCh 38 Chapter 38: Devil's Offer
- EinsamerWolf_66612dコメントCh 20 Chapter 20
- EinsamerWolf_66620dコメントCh 26 USJ Incident-Final
- EinsamerWolf_66624dコメントCh 12 Chapter 12: New York (Part 2)
- EinsamerWolf_66625dコメントCh 11 Chapter 11: New York (Part 1)
- EinsamerWolf_66626dコメントCh 101 Chapter 101
- EinsamerWolf_66626dコメントCh 10 Chapter 10: S.H.I.E.L.D. (Conclusion)
- EinsamerWolf_66628dに返信 EinsamerWolf_666
never mind... took too long to write that I guess...
[Image] - EinsamerWolf_66628dコメント
to slow, hehehe I got here first.
[Image] - EinsamerWolf_66629dコメントCh 7 Chapter 7: S.H.I.E.L.D. (Part 1)
- EinsamerWolf_66629dコメントCh 59 Chapter 58:- New Bloodline Skills and their Descriptions
- EinsamerWolf_66630dに返信 NullifiedEcho
no prob, I suggest you read other fanfics and take some inspiration on how to go about writing specific scenes the way you want them to come out, as well as punctuation. though to be honest I'm can't use punctuation to save my live all I know how to use is "" ** , ' !? and that's it. but as I said before, I'm no expert so take my advice with a grain of salt.
この本は削除されました。 - EinsamerWolf_66630dコメント
am I the only one who got whiplash reading this? ... it's a good story idea but I think it needs some work, not that I'm an expert or anything.
この本は削除されました。 - EinsamerWolf_66630dコメントCh 6 Chapter 6: Raccoon City's Upheaval (Final)
- EinsamerWolf_6661mthコメントCh 13 Chapter 12