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Oh i get it hes a "traitor" right?
Give me the answer please
Wait so if he fills a bucket in the ocean theres just gonna be a block missing in it?
You can't stop conversation dude. You do get final choice but that doesnt mean people have to agree or even like your choice.
I apreciate u just telling me what u were going for. Whenever you just tell us to reread and see parallels it doesnt work the way u might think. We can't see in your head and understand just what ur trying to convey we can only pull our own understanding from it.
Happy for another one. But i will say the relationship feels kinda forced to me. i mean in comparison widow is a monster compared to brian. I don't think it would be an exageration to say shes hurt/killed more people than hes had a conversation with.. So the how you say it? Connection. feels a little forced. Connecting over how there both bastards when there not anything like eachother feels and ill sayh it again forced.
Hey! Don't discount our rivalry with the elves as simple racism. An elf must have got to you before we could tell u the story.. But as my uncle rochther would tell you the only good elf is a dead elf. Well besides my good friend finn hes a half elf. Weve been adventurin some odd 20 years now.
So honest question why is the main character a rapist piece of shit? Like honestly was that required? Did he have to be a murdering rapist? Is that your kink or something? Is that why you wrote it? I mean, why is he running around killing people then cloning them into a robot and then forcefully having sex with the robot? I mean honestly what’s the draw to this there’s no real story. All it is is some sick fantasy where women can’t say no. You can’t even say you’re doing it for money because there’s no patreon page and this isn’t a paid story. so my only conclusion is that this must be your kink you must be the type of person who gets off on women being unable to say no. I mean, he started off as a regular kid right then he got put into a robot with a little bit of Afton in him, but how does that translate to him being a rapist? and I first I didn’t really have any issue with it killing bad guys taking them. It sucks but it’s not the worst but then Carmen Sandiego you did that not because she was evil because she’s not purposefully took her I mean honestly what the fuck made you write this what thoughts spawn this garbage.
He controls vibrations not the earth itself.
Mylnior is so awesome because odin implanted a galactic storm into it. A galaxy earseing storm.
Kill them all.
Whys he called master bun?