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Xeranas20dコメントfun fact. General Electric(GE) also makes the guns that go on the A10. aka the thing that turns men into mist.
Apparently he had been educating himself on the Roman Empire using The Great Sage to scour his memories. I was happy, my hard work had all turned out and now the Town was on the way to becoming one of the best places in this world. Now all I needed to do was to get Electricity up and running and make my own business in the form of Dishwashers, Dryers, Washing Machines and Weaponry... Oh wait, that's a company from my old life... 'Tehee!'- Xeranas1mthに返信 Mozuto
I mean that's fine in dialogue, but us as the readers don't need that, we know what his title is. When you do that you are writing it as if they are two different characters. Really when you are referring to the same character over and over again, you just use he/she. You should only say their name again if you mention a different character.
"... Huh?" Alex looked at the metal sphere where it was currently cracked in half, as he carefully examined what the cause of the explosion was. - Xeranas1mthに返信
I mean that's fine in dialogue, but us as the readers don't need that, we know what his title is. When you do that you are writing it as if they are two different characters. Really when you are referring to the same character over and over again, you just use he/she. You should only say their name again if you mention a different character.
"... Huh?" Alex looked at the metal sphere where it was currently cracked in half, as he carefully examined what the cause of the explosion was. - Xeranas1mthコメント
why do you keep switching between Alex and 4th progenitor. I'm a native English speaker and it's incredibly jarring. Just stick to one...
"... Huh?" Alex looked at the metal sphere where it was currently cracked in half, as he carefully examined what the cause of the explosion was. - Xeranas3mthコメント
not enough msg
As Itsuki continued to eat he couldn't help but feel that the meal was bland, he didn't know why. Obviously, he had cooked it perfectly without any mistakes, then why? - Xeranas3mthに返信 Mahou_Shonen
You'll have to screenshot the picture in chat and post it. That will almost always work.
4. Hyoudou Miki - Xeranas4mthに返信 MilkLover
Yeah same type of thing. I play teemo in league, which is mine...
Oh fucking God! - Xeranas4mthコメント
I don't really get why she's mad. This is fiction, you gotta let out your dark thoughts somewhere, this is probably the best place possible. Dark thoughts are like anger, they pile up.
Oh fucking God! - Xeranas4mthコメント
When your GF says she's a gamer but she only plays animal crossing and stardew:
Looking at the screen where my character is down while that hateful mana character is winning with full health - Xeranas5mthに返信 Vengeance9578
I know, I'm saying it's still the same. chapter 45 is the exact same, i even restarted my app to see if it was on my end.
この段落は削除されました。 - Xeranas5mthコメント
it's the same chapter as 45
この段落は削除されました。 - Xeranas6mthに返信 Licorice
right? who tf would want transmutation smh
Congratulations to the host for fucking and making Yami, a very important heroine of the To Love Ru manga, your wife, for this, you receive the following rewards: You have gained the ability "Transmutation", 5000 in all stats, Anti-FBI Shield, you have won the title: "Conqueror of Assassins", you have unlocked a Draconic skill "Dragon's Claws", your harem has won 2000 in all its stats! - Xeranas7mthコメント
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They had the two powerful ones Nahida wanted and five of the 40,000 yen ones. In other words, nine were missing. - Xeranas8mthコメント"No, let him cook." Ise started listening intently and the old man continued after he got the attention of everyone.
- Xeranas8mthに返信 Richard_P_Cumings
Easy. Ascending to Supremacy. THAT is an actual pokemon harem.
There will be a small harem. - Xeranas9mthコメント
Don't, writing through the yggdrasil phase gives your character(s) so much more depth, especially when they don't have pre-existing knowledge like a reincarnator would.
2 - Don't skip the Arc dork! - Xeranas10mthに返信 _NorthStar_(A/N: Is that a Power Stone I'm sensing? You should leave it here for safekeeping. Don't worry, I'll take good care of it.)
- Xeranas1yrコメント
Saeko is the only one I would add. She fits in well.
And then he will go to High School of the Dead as most of you guys requested. Let me know who you want in the harem in that world.]