Spacewarrior17
Hi Mortals, Mr. Death is here Oh.. someone is Dead! You're Next 😈🔪
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You didn't get what I was implying. The sentence was unnecessary or say not appropriate to explain the situation. also, been a long time I have read it. I most definitely forgor why I wrote it. ☠️
nah, don't worry.
Thank you for the review, just so you know the chapters are a little complicated and will still be for the first part. It is just a mean to set up the events and different powers in this world. I hope you add it to your library stay with the story in future. The story might progress at even complicated and greater overlapping level as the Synopsis suggests, nonetheless it will be Intriguing once you catch the outline.
"hahaha...." He laughed at the pathetic character. A writer who just writes and his writing is so bad that the viewers feel like they wasted their time to even check out the synopsis. As he laughed, tears began to fall down from his eyes, and he choked in the middle of his laugh and began to cry... cause he wasn't laughing at the character in the Novel, he was laughing at himself. "This is such a terrible writing style. ooofff... I am not going anywhere with this." I said to myself as I saved my half-ass prologue and closed the Tab without saving.
That is the problem of a desperate guy like me 😂
I cringed so much on myself hahha
for the last time Johny, it is pronounced sutle not sub-tle
haha 😶 TT TT TT 😭 It takes me a whole day to focus and write a chapter.
Why you have to bring it up? 😢 are you mocking me?😡 jk, I know it's same for all of us😔 but it also depends on our writing style and mine is terrible😂
I don't want to be a top writer, just an admirable writer whose words can both satisfy their desire through my words and convince my way of life.
I'm giving it a 4.4 star and I'm giving you actual down points in comments only, because I think this book has potential to grow and by that time I might not get the chance to review so thoroughly once more when it will get pilled up inside the bundles of webnovel 😅 This book is quite different from the cliche Werewolf storys that I often find everywhere, and I seriously don't like those... A Plus point is that this story is completely set in different world, which gives author an advantage to mold the world background more freely, and I like it. ... what is a slight downpoint is that, ahem.. I'm also writing a book in similar genre and I'm also a newbie who is terrible in English language, so don't take it personally... I find it a little hard to catch the words, paragraphs and there intended meanings, so consider trying to write things that can be understandable by mass readers without racking there brain. (webnovel is supposed to be easy to read)
nahhh
battle through the heavens...🐱
okay, but why am I getting so many Novel invitation 😂 I can't have a time to read all this 😭
I have been Invited here to Read🙂, I will consider it reading because of the YURI tag😌
Hmm.. looks interesting, but have you tried to explain the beginning of the apocalypse in later chapters. It would have looked more interesting and intriguing, if partially revealed in a prologue with a little cliffhanger things. you know...!