AbyssalSword
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AbyssalSword1yrに返信 the_reaver“I brokeded it Vegeta…”
'A golden shooting star that's so bright that I can even see it through a thick layer of clouds?' Alex thought with furrowed brows. 'That's strange. However, this world is already strange enough. This is just one more oddity added to the pile.'- AbyssalSword1yrに返信 BlackFandetailMy Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial Arts東方 · I'm Really Not Xu Xian
- AbyssalSword1yrに返信 CherryPoPsicle
You're funny. Thanks for the laugh, I hope you have a great day!
They could only fix it to the point that would allow him to walk somewhat normally with the support of a cane, but that was it. There was nothing more they could do. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 SebastianCarlisle
You're honestly hopeless...may God bless you with another brain because you've obviously lost yours.
"I think I'm supposed to train in this wilderness and become more powerful before entering human society again," Alex said. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 Simone007
While that is true, he is not obligated to do so. You give me instructions, I won't question them. If there's hole in your system, you cannot blame be for exploiting it because it's your fault.
"I'm sorry, Vice-Dean. In my fear of appearing too weak, I appeared too weak. I have lost, and that's that. I will remember your teachings, Vice-Dean," Michael said with a voice filled with shame. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 _Tea_Lover_
I hate you so much. 🙂
"I'm sorry, Vice-Dean. In my fear of appearing too weak, I appeared too weak. I have lost, and that's that. I will remember your teachings, Vice-Dean," Michael said with a voice filled with shame. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 MrShadowMan
YEEEEP!!
この段落は削除されました。 - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 YuanMonarch
I need...the name...the nostalgia...it's...too...STROOOOOOOONG!!!!!!!!!!
Alex got a terrible idea. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 MrShadowMan
*cries like a baby*
この段落は削除されました。 - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 MrShadowMan
"Relax! You already have everything you need to beat it!" "The power to believe in myself?" "Noooo...a KNIFE! Stab it!!"
この段落は削除されました。 - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 MrShadowMan
“Are you cryin?!” “There’s just too much beauty in this world.”
この段落は削除されました。 - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 Royston_Daniel
I read it as, "Thank YOU" rather than "THANK YOU".
Shang only nodded, also smiling. "No, thank you!" he said. - AbyssalSword1yrに返信 Volvo_62
"If I die learning, then I've learned and won't do it again."
'I've been too arrogant,' Alex thought with narrowed eyes. - AbyssalSword1yr発表
This is my novel, so it's obviously a 5 stars, 6 even! But jokes aside, if I were to rate my stuff, I'd say 4.2 or 4.4 stars. Writing Quality: I think my writing quality is as good as it gets. It's just writing, anyone fluent can get a 5 stars. Stability of Updates: I'm writing this pretty early on, I just posted the 6th chapter, but I plan to update every other day, so I put it at a 4 stars. Story Development: I think my pacing is a little too fast, but I'll hopefully work on that. I'll put a 3 starts here. Character Design: I like to give general face to a character, such as their public demeanor and general behavior, but I also keep many things about them hidden. I also like to describe their appearances, so I'll give myself a 5 stars. World Background: Oh boy...😂. For worldbuilding, I like to create my worlds before I start writing the story. I write the way the world or universe is designed, then add a power system, then the powerhouses, then the little guys, and lastly I pick a character from a random place to be the main character. So, I'd like to give a 5 starts here, as well. I gave an honest review here, so please give me some constructive criticism, it will only help me improve...just don't be too harsh.
- AbyssalSword2yrに返信 Totally_OriginalCh 4 Goal's decided! Safety assured?
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This is a gigguk reference btw.
THE TITANS ARE INVAD- AHEM...sorry. 😂 - AbyssalSword2yrに返信 DaoistKLgiXPCh 1 I will drive that car!
- AbyssalSword2yrに返信 Totally_OriginalCh 3 You suck, Dad.
- AbyssalSword2yrに返信 Laramie_Cottam
It might be Webnovel's anti-piracy system. Just don't scroll too fast and if it happens scroll slowly. If it doesn't change, just refresh the page.
Shang looked at the grand gates for a while.