Already fixed thanks for pointing out.

But where did he meet Lucifer?

I plan on incorporating a lot of the old quirks functions into the new one. But I want to give it a bit more progression and not completely OP from the beginning

Thank you, didn't realize the format got messed up!

Great question! All the characters will be +18 this version of the story is going to be a lot more mature early on and in my mind it didn't make sense to have teenagers fighting monsters. You notice the quest said UA Academy not UA High. There will also be a lot of changes to how the "school" functions so keep a look out for that.

All will be included

Another name for quirk factors is Plus Alpha Elements. It basically allows quirks to evolve and grow stronger over time instead of awakening once in a blue moon. Also people can consume things with Alpha Particles to grow stronger.

Yes

I hear ya

MB will fix soon

I agree entirely, but I felt like I needed to introduce a rework to his quirk bc if he can just swallow everything like Kirby, the fight scenes won't be that entertaining. The short version is when he gets hit by anything modified or created by a quick, he can absorb some of the energy from the strike. In the exam he didn't fight anything with a quirk so it didn't activate. My idea was to rebalance him so that he has to release pent up energy from taking damage or else he overheats and passes out. I just raised his skill ceiling but tell me if this makes sense

What you have pointed out is absolutely true. First, the MC is reincarnated after living a life with no responsibilities or cares. He has no moral character, so when faced with responsibilities, he will complain. He is injured because he knows nothing and overestimated his own strength. Being in a coma is just a handy time skip because I really don't want to write ten years of him just training and going on missions. As for him waking up and doing research and training, why wouldn't he? I think most people would change a lot if they after being in a ten-year coma. You're writing this review only after the fourth chapter. The MC isn't supposed to be perfect, the character needs to develop, and I don't think it would be much of a book if his character arc was complete before 10 chapters.

First of all, the time skip is necessary cause I don't want to drag through five years of a kid being trained as an elite assassin. Nothing much would happen and it would just leave people bored. Second, maybe I could have done a side plot where he goes on a mission, but I thought having the house attacked was a good way to demonstrate a power base. Third, the mc doesn't have a 1 billion bounty. That is Kikyo, his mother, who was the target of the mission. Fourth the Zoldyck family doesn't have guards on the outside, so you could just go over the walls or through the main gate if you are strong enough. And as for Silva being on a mission, Idk information can be bought.

Having him start out weaker gives me a clearer power development that I can follow. Instead of giving him god-like abilities I can have them slowly evolve and mature over time.

No, that was me filling up the word count, don't worry. He's not going to be moaning every time he's hit, lol :).

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