I'll correct it

Yes

Okay

None of that

I understand

Smoking here is not harmful, it's a magic cigarette, many people smoke because it is one of the many ways to subtly increase your mana reserves.

He will, I just want to make him look like a normal human being with a problem, someone people can relate to a not so perfect protagonist without any flaws.

You are forgetting something here, this is fantasy, it's not a normal cigarette, just something to relax, some kind of magic cigarette, not harmful.

I understand what you are saying, sometimes after using it for correction I'm forced to rewrite the whole chapter, I will try not to rely too much on it. Thanks for pointing this out.

Yes to help me edit the text, is there any problem with that?

Nickaido's here again with a brand new story. For all men who understand a man's fantasy, this is for you. Hope in and let's enjoy the ride. A Slice of life with action, women being conquered and of course smut, a romance as well. The harem will not be too big.

here's an image closer to the King of monsters.

Not yet but soon

Thks

She is, her Nyx will be included.

No

Around 2500 if I add the Higher World but I'm considering whether to start a new book just for this arc. The final stage, the real stage is the higher world.

Maria, Luna, Sakuya, Artemia, Kuina, Eris, Incursio, Sera. Of course she'll be included later, I'm talking about Gracier

Explain the problem for me to correct myself.