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Alot of fixing.
The story is good, but with all the grammar errors this feels like an MTL. I say it feels like an MTL because of all the little errors in every few sentences, that are synonymous with a Machine translation.
Is this a translation, if so who is the original author and do you have their permission to monetize the book?
my line would be, if I was in red dead ofc: "why hello there stranger, you look lost, wanderin up to my cabin all suspicious like, what do you want?"
"Flying" "Slammed"
"Body"
"Argument"