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Strongi18h発表- Strongi3dコメントCh 6 High Speed
- Strongi5dコメントCh 5 Deep Thoughts
- Strongi6dコメントCh 4 Biology
- Strongi7dコメントCh 3 Cafeteria
- Strongi7dに返信 m3gah1tss
In comparison to some Twilight SI that are on this app, he isn't, and Twilight vampires are pretty powerful. So while impossible to kill, he still can be overpowered, especially if he is alone again two or more twilight vampires.
3.I wish to have a mental shield, that is controllable and allows me to show people my thoughts if i so desire.' - Strongi7dコメント
I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. I do have a question. How does he turn others? Does it work like TVD? Where the person he wants to turn needs to drink his blood and then die. Or is it like traditional vamps where if he doesn't drain the person they will turn? I hope that it is like TVD because the other option seems like a hassle to deal with, but it is your story your choice. I am just curious how it works.
Ch 2 First day - Strongi8dに返信 WhiteAuthor
I like it. All three wishes seem reasonable for the world he is going to. Even with this, there aren't any serious threats to him. Also, fics that go with wishes and make MC super op compared to the world they are in usually die fast or are boring. Am looking forward to how this turns out. But by wishes alone, it looks like it will be a fun read. Please don't drop it 🙏.
3.I wish to have a mental shield, that is controllable and allows me to show people my thoughts if i so desire.' - Strongi8dに返信 batman_3_3_
I have to disagree. While I like true immortality, having a way out of it is a must. Else what would he do when the sun dies if humans don't discover a way to traverse space?
2.I wish for true immortality, meaning that nothing will be able to kill me and that the only way its possible for me to die is by wanting to die - Strongi5mth発表
First I love the story, and Barney being a Vampire is an awesome idea. I can't wait for the next update. I am also excited to see what other supernatural beings are in this world. I hope you don't drop this story since it seems like it will be awesome. One more thing. Now don't take this as me telling you what to do with your story. But I really hope you don't follow the lead of all others who basically turn their MC into a god who is too op to reasonably interact with other characters from the world. Anyway, thanks for the fun read. 😁
- Strongi10mthコメント
I found another picture that I liked for goblins while searching for one for house elves.
She proceeded to explain the exchange rate as she led them between different shops. It didn't take long before they were standing in front of a giant white building that looked slightly crooked. However, what held the attention of everyone in the group were the green creatures with big sharp teeth and big pointy ears standing guard in front of the bank, wielding weapons. - Strongi10mthに返信 BurgerNight
That isn't a mistake. He is a keeper hopeful ('a person likely or hoping to succeed.').
Klaus's parents are absent a lot of the time, which allows him to dedicate his time to learning magic without having to worry about them. They, of course, know about it. It would be extremely hard to hide it. They even know about his role as a keeper hopeful. 'Apparently, they made some kind of deal with the soul keeper. That is as much as I got from my assistant.' Although they don't appear to know about him being a reincarnated soul, or they don't think it matters. - Strongi10mthに返信 Vixdraconen
I had it planned out to add a brother later in the story.
We will leave every day running of Avalon to Zatanna for a while, she will do it for a while and then she will switch with one of her sisters. - Strongi10mthに返信 Vixdraconen
I didn't plan for this to be a harem story, but I did plan it for both Lily and Klaus to bring girls to feed on and have fun with from time to time. As for this mention of a harem, it isn't important for the story that much. They are really old so how they see relationships is different from someone who doesn't have that much time.
I actually don't understand how Lily ended up with James Potter, she is attracted to girls more then guys, hell at some point we had a harem of women, luckily for me she never was interested in binging other guys in it, actually she explicitly said she didn't want another man beside me, and I think that is because I can turn into a woman. - Strongi10mthに返信 Vixdraconen
No. Harry was already born before Lily was taken to the past. This fic is on something of a break. I have been planning to go through it and edit it. But I am concentrating on Keeper of Mana when I have time.
It took Lilly only few minutes to figure out how to transform, her forms are similar to how I look in my female form, except she has different coloring and she is bit shorter. Her eyes are emerald green, her fur is kinda off reddish. Now when I look at her, it would seem that her human forme change a little. Her hair is crimson red, her skin is pale and her ears have turned bit pointed. - Strongi10mthに返信 gutless
Thanks 😊, I fixed it.
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