is it just me or are the chapters getting shorter and shorter???

A new and as far as I can tell unique story by a good writer. While there are areas that can be improved, overall it is a good story with a mostly stable rate of updates, especially considering the author is basically a rookie who is writing this in his spare time. I am personally looking forward to seeing how they improve and develop as the story progresses.

the story would be great if the so called author bothered to get the name's right, instead it makes it almost too unbearable to read, particularly due to the inconsistent manner of the writing

palp is not so wise, could be Bo from Rouge One...or mabe just same name?

not necessarily, while the Mandalorians possess the most beskar. there are other sources, also they do sell beskar just in extremely small quantities or for excessive prices

I hate it when this happens

as far as I know it depends on what version he is

I believe you're logic is flawed, Charles goes into your mind and does whatever he wants, this is magic and it only enforcing the contract that you willingly signed, there is a massive difference.

I think he meant 80 time's 6year old shisui's Chakra

they had Combat knives

I thought mutants were a byproduct of celestial experiments and all future mutants were, at lease to some degree descendants of those, or am I missing something?

helo stargate, he wants the reality mirror, the one Daniel and later Sam and Kowalski use before the destroy it

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I would rather you continue tthi book

do keep in mind that the gendai are also highly force resistant, one of the reasons the sith tried to exterminate them

nice Optimus Prime tribute, would've been better if it was against a more important enemy though

I was referring to the armies and tech for the Ori, but I was also taking into consideration Merlin's weapon against Ascendant beings, as well as the Ori plague that nearly brought the Jafa to their knees. Also wouldn't his plan to become semi Immortal through nanotechnology make him really difficult to kill? From the show we know that while Anubis is Ascended his power is far lower than any other Ascended being throughout the series. Combine that with the fact that he was only allowed to continue to exist was to teach Oma a lesson, or simply to punish the metaphorical black sheep of the Ascended, and Anubis loses most of his threat level, save against people who lack the tech or unity to put up a fight. Also Anubis had to capture Thor and download his knowledge to aquire Asgaurd technology, and even then it was only a small portion. I mean zero offense with what I have mentioned above, just wanted to share my thoughts.

thanks for the chapter's, I would like to leave some points that I am confused about however do note that this is only in reference to Your story not the TV series. First if Korr has all the technology from Atlantis, most of the Asgaurd, Wraith, and Replicator, as well, doesn't this mean his only possible true opponent is the Ori? Also I highly recommend re-reviewing ancient tech as well as I believe you might have overlooked some less well known one's. All in all, thank you for the story so far.

chaos is probably what you get for mixing all of the other elements or it could be the black spheres the Sage of six paths uses, this is just a guess

if we're talking first, then wouldn't it be the Celestial that basically made mutants?