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Star Wars: Senator

作者: L0rds2278
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What is Star Wars: Senator

WebNovel で公開されている、L0rds2278 の作者が書いた Star Wars: Senator の小説を読んでください。A man in transmigrated into the Senator Thalron Veridian. While simultaneously being the King of Thyferra.Watch as he fights for his homeplanet and form factions in the Senate, while at the same time ...

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A man in transmigrated into the Senator Thalron Veridian. While simultaneously being the King of Thyferra. Watch as he fights for his homeplanet and form factions in the Senate, while at the same time preparing for the Clone Wars.

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I don't think I'm very good at descriptions but I hate it when books don't have one so... here I am! I might have more books if this on goes well and might reuse characters. and just to let you know im not planning on having this as one of those 'heroic,give up everything for others and actually care about if strangers live or die' nor are they meant to be one of those 'used to be good but Oh sO UneXPecteDly (that's how I express sarcasm thru text by the way) gets betrayed by there 'fRIenD' then ONE OF TWO THINGS HAPPEN 1. they're still good and decide to get as strong as they can but is tramatrised and has to deal with it (aka the one if not done properly is annoying as hell in my opinion but also made one of my favorite stories...) or 2. they're done with people's bull and start to f♡ck up some sh!t (in this storys I have no intention to censor the words but in some others (if this isn't so bad I have to just stop writing...) ) also... this isn't one of those 'build up to power' books... they don't do much in the beginning but I think it gets a bit better and they're op from the beginning but they still somehow grow... in this it's not about how you get power but what you do with it. also the mc is more of a genderless character but I had to put one in... and as a side note why are the classifications of genre different if the mc's a girl then a boy and has less at that... I get if one gender is more likely to be written in a certain way but at least include other types... and why do they not at least have a non-binary option... but that's enough of my ranting so try to enjoy! oh and one more thing... if you see a spelling mistake leave ONE comment on THAT paragraph with the correction please and if you don't like something then you can always review with me of what you think I could do better in the LITERAL REVIEW SECTION instead of b!tching bout it and flooding the comments. and if you just don't like it but have nothing to say or 'just don't want to' then don't bother and PLEASE don't leave a comment that just says something along the lines of ' I'm leaving ' if you have nothing else to say... this is a book not an airport you don't need to announce your departure nor will any one really care... so this is the real end and goodbye! wait actually just one more thing... just kidding! have a nice day.

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Bitter Rivalry, Forbidden Desire

In the tumultuous realm of " ," follow the gripping tale of Jessica, a spirited farmer's daughter, and Prince Raye, the enigmatic heir to the throne of Avaloria. Set against the backdrop of a picturesque village and a majestic castle, their lives intertwine in a story of bitter rivalry, forbidden desire, and the transformative power of love. From their first encounter at the annual Harvest Festival, Jessica and Prince Raye are locked in a battle of wills fueled by generations of animosity between their families. Their interactions are laced with barbs and insults, their hearts hardened by the bitter feud that has torn their kingdom apart for centuries. But beneath the surface of their mutual disdain lies a forbidden attraction that neither can ignore. As they clash like titans in a dangerous game of cat and mouse, their hearts are pulled inexorably towards each other, their animosity giving way to a fiery passion that threatens to consume them both. Yet, their love is forbidden by the rigid constraints of society and the expectations of their warring families. Caught between duty and desire, Jessica and Prince Raye must navigate treacherous waters as they struggle to reconcile their feelings with the bitter rivalry that divides them. As they grapple with their own inner demons and the machinations of those who seek to tear them apart, Jessica and Prince Raye are forced to confront the true nature of their feelings and the sacrifices they are willing to make for love. In a world where loyalties are tested and alliances are shattered, "Bitter Rivalry, Forbidden Desire" is a riveting tale of enemies-to-lovers romance, where passion and betrayal collide in a battle for the heart's true desires. Join Jessica and Prince Raye on a journey of redemption, forgiveness, and the enduring power of love as they discover that sometimes, the greatest love stories are born from the ashes of conflict.

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Nathan_Just
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The story is off to a good start and being a senator is new, since most fanfic of Star Wars have force sensitive or soldier in most. Keep up the good story.

1emanresU
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As of chapter 8, I take back my positive review, it doesn't matter if it's readable if what I'm reading is trash. The author keeps twisting lore and writing every character and organisation as egoless mannequins that only exist to give the MC what he wants, it's just plot convenience after plot convenience, and doesn't read like a lively story, it's just a list of them MC going around shopping.

1emanresU
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I tried this story again because It has a unique premise and I believe that if it was written by a competent author then this could have been one of the best star wars fics ever but it is not. The story is not engaging at all because it has no stakes and the MC faces no challenges, this is exemplified in the Kuat Drive Yard chapter where the MC recruits the best starship designer they have with no effort, no discussion, no trade, no nothing, it just happens because the author wants it to. Next he says he can just buy a whole starship manufacturing corporation for 200 million (this is pennies compared to what he's been throwing around) the author just hands his SI everything on a platter because he's to useless to make these things happen organically. Don't get me started on Blissex and his daughter calling the MC's designs genius, they're not even designs, just drawings of the hulls of cannon starships (since if he can actually design starships then he doesn't need Blissex). In short, the author is too unintelligent to write a smart MC so he compensates by making every other character a slackjawed, drooling moron and artificially removing every obstacle in his path. Do not waste your time on this.

1emanresU
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The writing quality makes this physically painful to read, I think the author would have more success if he posted this in his native language.

name1681
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Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

Bro_is_bored
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Story in early phase but it has good story line . Author did good amount of research about story but quality is not there yet It will take him to refine the story . But it is good for 1st time writer . Those wha are interested in military and poltitical ploy with action and little bit business building can give it a try .

Mattex97
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Author why have you stopped writing this masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KingPumpkin3
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It is my annual time to review things I like and this is an awesome one I hope you keep updating this but don’t forget to take breaks don’t burn your self out

DaoistDHxELv
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Enjoy the character, feels like a fresh take. Thanks for an interesting story and hope you can keep up the great work!

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Surock
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das ist eine sehr gute Story mach so weiter

Rakesh_Kumar_8224
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good story. I always try to read new but good story about star war

John_Hughes_6173
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it's an excellent story and proving to be one of the best I've read in a while

Holy_Knight777
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love the story not many star wars novels go with a leader character and plus not starting out the character with more midiclorianos then anakin skywalker love the story keep up the great work

name1681
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Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.

Glen_Malone
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Great story really interesting idea. The most fun I’ve had with a Star Wars fan fic in awhile. Keep up the good work.

BaserkerK
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A new and as far as I can tell unique story by a good writer. While there are areas that can be improved, overall it is a good story with a mostly stable rate of updates, especially considering the author is basically a rookie who is writing this in his spare time. I am personally looking forward to seeing how they improve and develop as the story progresses.

Pelousebourse76
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Good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

John_Smith_3313
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This is really great keep up the good work

KingKalamity
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I personally think this is a good story idea; it's not another Anakin pov fanfic, which is already a thumbs up from me, and although the grammar isn’t 10 out of 10, it's still better than some of the other fanfics I’ve read.

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