Hey, this is not related to this comment, but i saw your note about you needing to take more time off and I was wondering if you have considered hiring an editor to do it for you since there are still quite a lot of little mistakes in the grammar.

i was wondering why it was rated so high...

ahh yes credit that's what feeds the kids

knijn#1363 on discord forgot to say that on my reply

knijn#1363

rip that sucks if you think you need an editor i can do it for pretty cheap did it a bit on ********** before

?? but your novel costs money to read?

oh i thought that if your novel is premium you could afford an editor since they aren't that expensive?

why don't you get an editor if you think your grammar is bad?

you should rewrite imo i dont read past the first 2-3 chapters if they are bad because the story eventually gets better

this has aged poorly xD

if you have problems with grammar/gender why not get a proofreader/editor?

i don't know if you're blind or stupid but the writing sucks

u ok bro?

dude get an editor/proofreader PLEASE

this is the best response ive ever seen

having to read trough 100 chapters is a bit much for the story to become good isn't it?

"when I posted that i was just trying to be funny" hope your sense of humor has gotten a bit better

oh shit you must really be broke if 1dollar a page is too much

can you link me a google doc with the chapters cuz i'm too broke to pay for reading