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Unsealing: Omnipotent Father

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Warning, the author of this book is a; -An uneducated person that graduated only in high school and has poor English skills. -Learned his while watching anime, reading novels and manga. -Is a father that's trying to earn money from working while also doing some part-time jobs. Thanks for your understanding. ___________ Discord Link: https://discord.gg/597UzYw ___________ For donation: ko-fi.com/omnipotentdad patreon.com/omnipotentdad ty~ ty~ ___________ Mo Xie, someone that had reached the peak on the Realm that which he lord over, Alchemy? Smithing? Cultivation? Weapon Master? Inscription? Name it and he would definitely have vast knowledge about that, with the life of a supreme expert which he believes to be the peak, his life that had already reached thousands of years, ended... Ehhh? How? well, something stupid, you just have to read it. But with a twist of fate, he was reincarnated, into an all-powerful, supreme, and useless mortal. "WHAT?!" Crippled Cultivation, 'a' Soul Sea that is destroyed, and physique that can only possess Mortality (Well, that is until he can cultivate again of course.) But how can he, Mo Xie stand to become someone useless after being someone supreme? With all the knowledge he had accumulated through billions of years, he'll fight his way, to become the greatest... FATHER!? -Will be uploading a new version in Mangatoon

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Chapter 1Mo Xie

Somewhere within the distant Realm, where power reign supreme, and authority comes second.

The Law is nothing in the face of true power, and above those power, a single man is standing at the peak.

His name is Mo Xie, billions and billions of years old, he mastered alchemy, blacksmithing, everything that you can think of, but he only has one yearning, and that is, to feel the warmth of having a family.

Mo Xie, a genius of the Mo Clan from the Shu Dynasty, at the age of 18, he devoured all of the powers, making them a stepping stone for his power, his rise was unstoppable, even the most feared Demon Gods, Asuras, and Sacred Monsters feared him to the bones.

With their tails between their legs, all of them hid to the very edge of the realm, not daring to even take a peek at the Humans, afraid of any retaliation coming from Mo Xie.

Mo Xie cared for the good being of the Human beings, but after arriving at the very top, what can be said?

"It is boring here... my very own God Palace, but there are no servants nor people, not even friends..."

A man that still looked like he is in his mid-twenties is currently sighing within his throne room, that cultivator is Mo Xie.

Standing up, he started to walk in whatever direction he felt like going to.

The power he cultivated is extremely frightening.

Sealing, Suppressing, Illusions, and Realism.

Just by these names, you can already make up of what he can do, and him, as a weapon master, didn't even need to release and type of weapon comprehension.

Creating illusions, making it a reality, just imagining that he can create 100 illusion of you and make it into a reality, how can you even fight.

And with Sealing, he can seal the cultivation power of any enemy he faces, containing them or even killing them with a slap is no big deal after that.

Billions and billions of years had passed, yet no one had dared to challenge him, a sad reality in fact.

His only joy? Watching mortals live their 100 years of life struggling, families living with love, he yearns it, yet he couldn't do so.

Once he stepped into a World? It will immediately be destroyed.

"Haa... Being in the Peak is lonely..."

Then out of nowhere, Mo Xie thought of something.

"I can seal my cultivation for a bit, about 30 years, then play with the mortals!"

Mo Xie smiled as he thought of this, he immediately walks towards the stairs, summoning a portal towards a random World.

"Tranduan Seal! I shall seal my cultivation to their maximum capabilities... hmmm... Dragon Realm? That's a little so weak, well, I guess I will just enjoy it!"

Mo Xie smiled as his cultivation were sealed, he still had his powers, but he couldn't use it, all of his skills can only be used by a power that has Gargantuan Supreme God stage, three stages below his current power.

"I guess, I will just learn a few low-level skills... I think a lot of people had given me some..."

Mo Xie walks towards the portal, he's planning to learn these skills later once he entered the New World, but something happened.

As soon as Mo Xie took his 4th step, he couldn't help but wobble, he couldn't control the super weak body of his, he forgot something, something extremely basic.

"I forgot to seal my Physique!"

With such a great physique, his body started to increase in size and mass, due to the passage of time, Mo Xie had forgotten his invisible physique that he had invented through all those billions of years ago.

"I'll die!"

"Tanguan Seal! Trangula Seal! Trenge Seal!" Mo Xie kept casting sealing skills, one after the other, circulating his Celestial Energy within his body, trying to calm down the explosion, and soon enough, his body stopped expanding as it started to come back to normal.

"That was close!" Mo Xie wiped the sweat on his forehead as he leaned on the wall, but he forgot something, he's in the 999 Heavenly Suppression Stairs that he created himself, there are no walls!

"Whaa!" Mo Xie slipped from the stairs as he started to fall.

"I couldn't fly!" Mo Xie started to sweat again, it is a hundred thousand kilometers down, without his physique and only the power of a Legendary Ranked warrior, he couldn't unleash any form of power to fly.

A few hours later...

Mo Xie is still falling: "Well, life is meaningless, I can just enter my Eternal Sleep, there, I would at least have a friend in the afterlife, right? enemies are welcome too."

Mo Xie smiled, as he waited for his doom.

Three days had passed...

"I`ll just kill myself..."

Mo Xie spoke, as he withdrew a sword out of his body.

"Hahaha, Demonic Blood Thirsty Sword, you, my one and only partner, will end my life today, may we meet in the afterlife!"

Mo Xie pierced the sword to his heart, blood started to spurt out as he sighed: "This is a good way to die..." Pausing for a bit, Mo Xie continued.

"I wish... I could live my life again, anew."

His body started to glow as it slowly decayed, turning to ashes.

"Ashes to ashes... Dust to dust..."

Mo Xie's final word as he lost his life.

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...

Another million of years had passed.

Somewhere within the lower level World, a man lying on the ground with a thin body holding a rusting sword, although it has pure muscles, it is still too skinny, a person without any proper nutrition but overworked its body.

Clearly, that person had died.

But something happened, golden lights started to gather on that man, entering its body, slowly, his heart started to beat again, the veins in him started to expand and contract as blood flowed steadily again.

Tattered clothes with pants full of holes, that man's eyes opened suddenly.

"Ha-a-a-aH!" The man started to inhale a lung full of air as he started to wheeze.

The man looks from left to right.

"Where am I?!"

The man slowly stood up, but after just his first try, he dropped back down on the ground near a puddle of water.

The man looked at his hands, he could clearly tell now, this is not my body!

"Wh-"

The man then stopped his word, he closed his eyes and self-transcendence.

Memories after memories kept flooding in his brain, a smile broke out of his face and spoke: "His name is also Mo Xie? what a coincidence..."

"A war with other Clan? I will avenge your grief..."

"Wait!"

Mo Xie exclaimed, something isn't right!

"Broken Meridians... Incomplete Spirit Body... Crippled Cultivation..."

Mo Xie started to scan each and every nook of his body, his previous smile vanished and what replaced it is a mocking smug expression.

"The most useless of all useless body... Even a mortal is stronger than this one..."

Pausing for a bit, Mo Xie sighed, he needs to eat, but with his current status, he couldn't even move.

Mo Xie slowly looked at the sky and spoke: "If you are going to reincarnate, I, Mo Xie, couldn't you do it in a healthy body at the very least?"

Clearly, Mo Xie is talking to that unknown being, that one person that oversees everything, made everything, and dictates where the sun rises and falls.

Mo Xie sighed as he smiled and looked at the road: "I have not felt this powerless since I was a baby, hahaha."

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DaoistGreenOnion · 東方
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778 Chs
目次
0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Separation
2 :Who Am I?
3 :Origin of the Sin

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Elude
EludeLv10

Forgive me if there any mistakes in the review, I'm typing this out on my phone. It appears that the author does not accept constructive criticism? I read until chapter 20; while many others only read a few chapters before reviewing, so I hope you do not attack me for reading only '20' chapters when reviewing. The grammar is subpar, to say the least, but the flow of the story is somewhat understandable and I can vaguely comprehend the general direction of the plot. Furthermore, the characters are like cut out cardboard figures with no real personality; it appears that they exist only to push the plot forward. Writing about a 'billion-year old master' is difficult, to say the least, when reading you somewhat expect for the MC to know of a limitless abundance of skills yet this not shown very well. Are we supposed to expect for the MC to have only been sleeping for most of those years? To even try to believe that is extremely unrealistic and requires a very broad mind from the readers. For a person who is writing to make money, the quality is honestly not high enough. I've read many other originals on the site which have far less publicity than this, yet those stories have a more defined plot and much better grammar/flow. So, I'll try to give my review according to the general system of WN. Writing Quality: 2.5, although the writing/grammar leaves something to be desired; it is somewhat understandable. Stability Of Updates: 5, the updates have been punctual as far as I can see. (Although I'm not sure if the quality has dropped over time as I stopped at C20.) Character Design: This is honestly a 1-1.5 for me, the idea of a 'billion-year-old' master is extremely badly portrayed. My personal feedback is this: Don't bite off more than you can chew, for your type of novel, the MC being designed as a legendary 50-100-year-old genius that once reached the peak would have been much better. Why? This leaves room for error, as it is extremely unbelievable for a billion-year-old monster to know such limited information. Furthermore, the way the MC acts is far too unbefitting of someone that ancient. But if the MC was only 50-100 years old which is still considered an elder in human terms, it allows us to actually have leeway in our mind to believe that the MC is human and can make mistakes; even though he was at the VERY PEAK of the ENTIRE universe in his last life. The side characters that I've seen up to C20 are also extremely plain, they exist solely for the readers to have a 'funny' and 'unreasonable' read when one is drunk and not thinking straight. This is fine for some, but not for me. Story Development: As I've said before, extremely plain where the chapters are spewed out only to be 'there' yet with no essential plot or meaning. 2-2.5. World Background: Although it's not fantastic, there is still a vague world I can picture while reading up to C20. - 2/5 Overall, this novel was extremely dull and boring to me which disappointed me greatly due to the number of 5-star-reviews, which made me feel a need to review this novel myself so as to balance it out. This novel's idea even though not crafted very well may appeal to some but not me. (I may have an higher expectation than your average reader which could be because I've been spoiled from the number of good novels — which naturally also includes originals, where the grammar is much better than this story and they also have very well-thought-out plot but have a lower rating/less popularity than this story. This was just my 2 cents on this novel. (I primarily created this since the large number of 5-star reviews did not match the content I expected)

trikz
trikzLv4

I really wanted to like this novel, I love clan or sect development novels. But like most people have said already, it just a collection of cliches from different Chinese novels. The novel is random and all over the place. The main character is supposed to be smart but makes random stupid decisions for unexplainable reasons. Instead of focusing on building his power while he is weak (like an actual smart person would do), he stupidly runs around being arrogant, feeling like he is above everyone else when in fact his cultivation is extremely low and he is not as smart as he thinks (To the point that he is even ignorant about his own body and cultivation). The power levels when it comes to the main character are all over the place. From what I have read so far, the mc's power level is basically whatever the author says it is at any given time.No cultivation? no problem, with his weapon he just randomly created and his (deus ex machina) intent he can basically kill anyone he wants. The power levels are basically a joke, even if the strongest person on the continent shows up, the author just needs to come up with some random (super Saiyan) reason for the mc with the lowest cultivation rank to be able to kill him easily. I mean, the mc basically boasts about how all-knowing he is, to the point of being able to raise anyone's cultivation at will. Wouldnt it be better for him to just raise his own cultivation to at least a decent level first? that would have the entire thing a lot more believable. Overall, I am really disappointed with this novel as it could have been way better. I decided to drop it as I could tell that it would only be a waste of time as this novel is going nowhere fast.

Frenchiie
FrenchiieLv10

Aaahh, finaly, i think this novel, Daedalus, and The Mech Touch are what makes Webnovel original novels the best new writer ones out there in the internet, there has been some jewels on RRL, but now it's time has passed, and there this new generation writers that are so amazing. Allright here's come my review. First off right on the bat, we get a nice prologue setup, that get us into the mood wanting to know more. The characters are getting fleshed out, somes not that much, it's the beginning of the novel, and there's tons of new characters, but what is really nice here, is you won't get one dimensional people in any point of the story. And that is great, there's tons of leads for many possible "main plots/sublots?". Well there's room for many things amazing things, as said, there's second role characters or even tird wheels, that feels like they want to "breaths" more into this story, giving it even mroe depths than it has at the moment. This leads to a conclusion where you got a badass MC, that use it's heads to use what he gots efficiently, without being a pushover nor a big studs rampaging everywhere, plus we got hints that his top aint it in the Universe, so as i said, it leads to a lot of promising futures. Dig into it! You won't be disapointed! Ah! and the Author is jsut so dedicated to this sotry, he works from 5 to 6, got family life with a new baby, writing this novel from 8 to 12pm, i mean come on, theres a patreon up, we all can share some loves to him as he does to us. BIG UP!

GoldenKitsune
GoldenKitsuneLv11

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