pretty nice intel now, the Author tries to be original which I like personality change, joining Artemis Famlia, and how the system works. I just think making him half-cursed spirit is just unnecessary you could give him mind protecting skill. i only hope the Author wouldnt nerf the mc, Sukuna can solo this verse if the mc will become weak it would be very boring

This is one of the danmachi stories that made me intrested in the sea of trash ideas. Future Rudeus deserve happiness he lost due Hitogami. But the Author wrote the character , not like he is Rudeus at all, it could be any reborn person not showing Rudeus speacil characteric the overwolming magic power and as well magic knowladge and more are kind of added to character like cheat, not part of the character as Rudeus. the Author took the point of conflict in the character in the first chapter preventing character devolpment as well close up as Rudeus. in first place the anime is about him overcoming the fears and trauma as shut in and fat loser, in his second life, so third life should be smilliar conflict.

So sad the author left this project😭😭

Because he have limitation it cost him LP which is his life.So if he waste them all he will die, and the skills you said to give him costing too much

I have to say I liked the fanfic even though I normally don't like Yuri, the writing is really good giving the fitting vibes.How do you develop her potential romance members along with her being able to give Falna is interesting.But still, I have a few points I would like the Author to take a look at.1. I appreciate you keeping close to the original Shalltear abilities that were written in fandom but sure those abilities aren't all she has so you could add spells or skills that feat vampire or job class,2. She is level 100 as such she and all other guardians have the skill to null all attacks from low-level weapons (not to mention even without it nothing should hurt her).3. I don't get what is her motive to conquer Orario as she doesn't see herself as a superior species to rule over such weak members.In any case, continuing to write you have a good story with good writing,

This isn't the cloth he where right now but this his appearance

Probably yes

Really liked the idea, the writing is also very good.I hope we will see the evil side of shalltear more, Also she is 100 level monster lowly monsters just looking on her fear and submissive the self to her.

She could just use a control Anemia spell on both of them

Obviously but he doesn't know it he only saw the anime what he knows is just what is written in wiki and even that he doesn't remember

Esdeath akame ga kill, Kurumi tokisaki, misaka mikoto and shokho Misaki, fairy tail girls like erza or mirajane

I like she make herself familiar with new abilities but misaka main way of fighting is electricity, she could summon thunder to make nomu dust or use a railgun to pierce his brain, or just destroy it with millions of volt . You could see when she attacked touma when she attempt to sucide than she could make a bridge greatly damaged I doubt nomu could survive it

The Author doesn't make any sense in his story, if you choose Gojo Satrou's power the mc should be op. Monsters can affect space😂😂 He is strong and talented yet nobody notices him including exclusive . I really couldn't read it longer as it was painful to eyes and brain. Author read wiki of both Danmachi and Jujutsu kaisen if you use elements from both.

What I seek is logic, if he is this much strong then he should be in the main force even if he is level 4. Also, he should go with them in their travel to the deep floors. Also way in 6 years he doesn't know anyone with his talent he should at least be known as Ais rival which should attract some people to talk with him

Thank you for the chapter! I have to say this is the greatest Danmachi I have ever read, this only shows the effort and quality of the author. I have a few things to ask or suggest can you make the Mc bring more technology to the world? I feel mc has focused too much on his leveling up and becoming stronger but he stopped creating new things such as armor or weapons. Will silver's harem get bigger? Would he have new abilities such as mind control or time stop? Would he make a contract with spirit? Also, you could bring more research in genetics as it would be interesting if he could absorb things like elve's lifespan or enhanced senses of demi human.

I hate it!!! Why did you make him join hestia??!! He need resources right? He need money right?? Then why you ruined the story only to make other hestia famillia story like all other bad stories😭😭😭😐

Nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

You don't mean you drop this novel right?

Get well soon😉

I thought it was good fanfic when I heard he has fujitora powers but it's dissatisfying the Author limits his power by level. The cliche of joining the Hestia Familia is boring, he should be chosen loki famillia.