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- Manjuan2 years ago発表
Decent start and then trash afterwards.
- Manjuan2 years ago発表
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- Manjuan3 years ago発表
Another trash to remove. 😒🤢🤮 ...................... . .. ..... . .... ...... ... ... . .. .... ....... ................ ...
- Manjuan3 years ago発表
Meh............................................................................................................................. The numbers speak for themselves.
- Manjuan4 years ago発表
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- Manjuan4 years agoコメント
So... the count got burnt to ashes AFTER he agreed. Weird how grammer works and why some readers are sensitive about it.
この段落は削除されました。 - Manjuan4 years ago発表
No explanation for anything. I don't know if the Mc is idiotic or if the author skips over everything. No worldbuilding. Bland characters. Everything the author says is a contradiction. A lvl 50 assassin(cause there's no explaining and the highest lvl NCP is under lvl 100) can dodge and run away from a lvl 200 elite monster. Really coherent.
- Manjuan4 years ago発表
Regular dream-fulfillment Chinese novel. If it's your cup of tea, then go ahead. ...................................................................................
- Manjuan4 years agoコメント
"While the Outer Disciples are also hardly seen because" and "according to what Qin Yi had heard" are both dependent clauses while the last part of the sentence is an independent clause. Suggestion: "[T]he Outer Disciples are also hardly seen because, according to what Qin Yi had heard, [t]he Outer Disciples Tournament is about to begin. Or: "[A]ccording to what Qin Yi had heard, the Outer Disciples are hardly seen because [t]he Outer Disciples Tournament is about to begin
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