I feel the same way. It's like it's chopping a paragraph from the beginning and end of each chapter.

This mc seems to be a whining coward and his wanking jokes got old very quickly. Was he 14 years old before transmigrating?

This is a very interesting fanfic. I have read pretty much all the star wars fanfics on this site and this is one of the few good ones. We are not too far into the story yet so it is hard to tell the future, but the fanfic has a solid foundation, and the author seems decent also. There are no weird tropes which are commonly seen on this site, and the mc is pretty smart and thankfully this hasn't been achieved through everyone else just becoming brain dead. As of chapter 37, I would recommend this to anyone who likes star wars.

Life often must come first, that is just normal. I would say we are in a good place at the moment, thanks for the writing.

A really great bit of work. I am enjoying it very much and recommend it to anyone who likes the hobbit/lotr. The stability of the updates seems to have to have become stable now which was my only gripe in the begining.

Solid star wars story. From the point of the view of a sith which is kinda neat. I have partially read this on this site previously before it got pulled, not sure if it is the same person or not, doesnt really matter. Either way a solid bit of fanfiction, worth a crack.

I do wonder why he is pretending to be an auror at this point? The past several chapters paint a picture of a meandering story, just aimlessly drifting. As it all seems out of character and irrelevant to the plot.

Death. This is madara he doesn't need anyone.

Your grammar is fine. Good chapter btw

Good chapter. also yes keep

I like this version of Cersei. Good job author.

once or twice, sure, but hes starting to sound like a nemesis pokemon hybrid

I am not certain why you have him keep saying stars

Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to how this will develop.

Now THIS is the attitude that Snape that should have had.

What a waste. Also, it is unlikely people will bother with other novels if you have a history of abandoning them.

This was a very good idea, and defo a first among hp ff's

Well I did not think I would ever be seeing an update to this novel. Pleasantly surprised.

At the current point he is indeed, but the strength leans more towards the more esoteric sides of the force rather than raw power, so their is a lot more trickery than direct confrontation

Ergh, not ai's. Those are never done well.