rising_darkstar
Just writing for fun💕 text me for I am a lonely soul lololol
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The story has a good vibe to it. At first it would seem like your basic clichés but the story soon picks up the pace with mysteries and such. It is a pleasant read but at the same time it keeps you on the edge of your seat. I like how original you were with names because names can totally change the vibe of a character and that really matter. Although the story is really good I would like to ask the author take help in proofreading the chapters. The story is nice but has silly mistakes in paragraph spacing and stuff. But no worries! its a basic issue with all authors haha I do that too. KEEP UP THE GOOD Work💕
Yes, I really do appreciate you pointing my mistakes :D I will make sure to keep the things you pointed out in my mind when I write. Thank you for taking out the time for reading it and giving your opinion on it. Good with your book too! I will make sure to continue reading it when I get time haha 💕
yeah- I still haven't got around to proofread it. oops!