rising_darkstar

haha no worries >~< Im glad it made ya happy

The story has a good vibe to it. At first it would seem like your basic clichés but the story soon picks up the pace with mysteries and such. It is a pleasant read but at the same time it keeps you on the edge of your seat. I like how original you were with names because names can totally change the vibe of a character and that really matter. Although the story is really good I would like to ask the author take help in proofreading the chapters. The story is nice but has silly mistakes in paragraph spacing and stuff. But no worries! its a basic issue with all authors haha I do that too. KEEP UP THE GOOD Work💕

Yes, I really do appreciate you pointing my mistakes :D I will make sure to keep the things you pointed out in my mind when I write. Thank you for taking out the time for reading it and giving your opinion on it. Good with your book too! I will make sure to continue reading it when I get time haha 💕

thank you😭 I'll to keep the updates constant as much as possible 💕

im just gonna sit and sip my tea

For a prologue it really sets the mood. I really like how strong the symbolism is in this chapter. Idk why I felt like I opened someone's diary and read their thoughts about the world haha

thank you💕

and yeah, I do need a proofreaders 😂 Im so lazy to proofread my own work oof. I asked a friend to help me, she said she will right away when she gets free

i appreciate your input! I will keep the things you said in mind. Im glad you like that you like the plot so far. :)

Thank you, I really appreciate it! I would update more frequently but Im quite busy and usually down with health issues .---. I'll post the next chap asap :D thank you for always reading!