A good story is one where one enjoys reading it, it does not matter if it is cliche or does not make much sense, after all having fun and finding joy in reading it is all that matters

now my consince pains me

Do not fucking read this bs I read it at the start was because the sex scenes were good and thought meh but the more it went on, the sadder and more stuffing I felt, and then came the disgust I wish I never read it, I almost wanna puke now it can't leave my mind it makes me rage at the MC and fucking wanna kill the author tbh but not gonna lie I fucking think xia qingyu deserved it I fucking hate that bitch alas, this is shit do not read now it has sullied my pure mind and eyes sigh.. it even made reading other novels a bad experience I am in constant fear for the Mc and this coming up in novels again

well said brother, I read it at the start was because the sex scenes were good at the start and thought meh but the more it went on, the sadder and more stuffing I felt, and then came the disgust I wish I never read it, I almost wanna puke now it can't leave my mind it makes me rage and fucking wanna kill the author tbh

man this was a pretty good read I hope you could keep writing it, I really enjoyed the premise for it............................, .........

lmao this is so funny hahhaha

honestly i dont think saying white skin is excessive or meant with harm it is just some countries or peoples aesethetic here we find yellow and tanned skin atractive and whites are called people who are weak and dont work, and darker skined men are hardworking but it might not be so for other places

hmmm.. from my point of view things were quite rushed and makss less sense the way i see it

it is kinda getting boring for me :

well that was the most hypocritical thing ever, I got to commend you on that, you guys are way worse than the Author

top 199 I wonder how many chapters that is worth

hey man why remove it, it was so good can I get the chapters you removed again?

hmmm author according to the number of reviews and votes since the latest chapter you are 18 extra chapters in debt

3rd person is way better though

this book is nice but there is some parts that make no sense at all it is mostly due to the bad spelling but if you manage to get a good editor it would be much nicer

first of all you should get something right. Demonic Cultivation mean strength is everything and all else is secondary

bruhh this is fucking mtl fuck you webnovel

yeah main hall or temple would have been a better choice of words

well it could be a mistake from an amateur translator

guys here gun means spear it is probably a mistake but the wierd thing it is like someone used mtl for this the only reason i could think of for the use of guns instead of spears