I love the main character easy going life. It something I wish I had right now. Even if he complains alot about being stressed out, I think waking up to a rich family is the best thing that can happen to him. But I think if you could make your writing more elaborate and clear it will be easier to read

Although there are some parts that are hard to understand because of the way you wrote it, the story is interesting

In this chapter it was hard to tell if you switched from first person point of view to a third person point of view. I think you should work on that

I found myself drawn to the characters, I see a woman who is going to be strong and I am already lovin' it. Your writing style 🤯. It made me jealous. While I continue to read this book I hope it becomes a manhwa some day

I love the story, I think I love Sam more. I would like to see the mate he would marry. What i don't like about the story is lillian ability not to fight back. Weak females are not my thing, I do hope to see her become a strong female lead. The story is well written, a bit rushed for my taste but still good

Your writing style makes it seem more like a screen play than an actual novel. If that is what you are going for

I think you really brought out Hwang character well, I found my self loving her and hoping that they would pick her and when I saw she got an offer from that company I was glad about it, I can see that you have published many books for that I was jealous because my book is the first book I am publishing on webnovel. it made me want to get to where you are now. anyways the storyline is[img=recommend]

I was so glad when the author changed it from first person point of view to a three person point of view, it really brought out the characters more. I love that there is a sort of mystery and suspense to it, makes you wonder why he is calling her my Nadia. I see emily and Nadia friendship as unhealthy and I think Emily is just advising her friend in the right way cuz you won't want your friend to enter a suspicious job just for money

I will be honest, your work is good but there are some part that needs a bit of work. I am saying this because as a writer I would also like if someone tell me where I need to improve on, me I am a writer who has grammar issues, if you take a look at it you would know that I have some issues I need to work on and I am doing that

This is the kind of novel you wich could also be made into a manhua, I really hope this story gets to that point. I think you are a good writer and I hope to see more chapters

I love the whole concept, it really scream out this bad bitch not a helpless lady in distress, one of the things I like about her is that she wants to get revenge but I feel like it will destroy her at the end

This is just my personal opinion but i feel that this story will be better if written in a first person point of view.. like I instead of she

And steamy scene too

This is the kind of novel you hope would be a manhwa, I really hope that happens, the write up is good and I love to read more. I am a sucker for manhwa and also for tyrant kings

you did not have to republish it some where else...what of the readers you have gathered. just go to where you write your book..the setting .they will ask if you are signing up for a competition

well I think your book is good enough to enter in the contest...it basically the place in which you write your synopsis and all

why don't you enter your book in the competition the WSA

Your description of the fighting scene so 🔥

I was only going to read 2 to 3 chapters but before I knew it I was in chapter 5, you are a good author, you protest the characters quite well, and the storyline you know how to string the readers making them want more..now that I have written my review let me get back to reading your book

The story is well written, the author's writing skill is quite clean and poetic. You can also see the story progressing very nicely, makes you want to see what the ML character will do next. It the kind of novel you hope would have a manhua or manhwa