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dragonfyr3

dragonfyr3

Lv14

I am a big book worm and trying to write my own stories.

2018-12-25 入りましたCanada
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277.8h

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40

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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr32yr
    コメント

    no. just no.

    Ch 267 5 Years After
    The Alpha Prince and his Silver Lone Wolf
    ファンタジー · madskie00017
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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr32yr
    コメント

    I hate how this author gets to an action and then does *flash back* it ruins the scene and mood you should be aiming for. it's unnecessary info

    Ch 121 Kratos versus Friends (Part III)
    The Alpha Prince and his Silver Lone Wolf
    ファンタジー · madskie00017
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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr32yr
    コメント

    I'm finding these flash backs redundant... flash backs are suppose to be done a certain way or they become annoying.. you should be writing the flash backs as scenes before the other events happen... 🤦‍♀️

    Ch 56 Falling Deeply
    The Alpha Prince and his Silver Lone Wolf
    ファンタジー · madskie00017
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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr32yr
    コメント

    omg!!!

    "Illeus!" he exclaimed as soon as he picked up the phone. "Where have you been my boy?" 
    The Silver Crescent Alpha Prince
    ファンタジー · MishaK
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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr32yr
    コメント

    thought she was too straight forward

    He woke up, baffled as to what just happened. It was just an erotic dream.
    The Silver Crescent Alpha Prince
    ファンタジー · MishaK
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  • dragonfyr3
    dragonfyr33yr
    に返信 Stephen_max

    thank you!

    Lotharis
    ファンタジー · dragonfyr3
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