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Stoned_Daoist_6663dに返信 MyMumCallsMePigHinata +1
Recalling the 'God', Shibai, from the Boruto series, Naruto made up his mind. 'I need to be at least that strong to even have a chance of returning. This world has plenty of jutsu involving the dead; maybe I can use one to bring my family back to life.'- Stoned_Daoist_6666dに返信 purplestormtakenMagari Image.
- Stoned_Daoist_66611dに返信 mongrelgil"Roar!"
- Stoned_Daoist_66611dに返信 Daoofholes6969Jonin: The stronger members of the ninja village with great skill and power at their disposal.
- Stoned_Daoist_66614dコメント"But we still owe you for your help in eliminating the threats of Ares, Hercules, and Iapetus while saving our daughters, the Amazons. If those three were successful in what they wanted to accomplish, then not just the Amazons but the entire world would have been at risk especially with Zeus still missing. Therefore, if there is anything you want, you can ask us. We will try our best to help you..." Hera offered.
- Stoned_Daoist_66629dに返信 Illusiveone
Exactly 💯💯
He let her go and went toward the table nearby. Her gaze shifted to the table as well, where a map of Westeros lay spread out. Skagos was marked with a large circle. She also noticed a large, ancient horn in the room, covered in Valyrian inscriptions. - Stoned_Daoist_66629dに返信 WebReaderPub
There is a theory that Cannibal is in hibernation at Skagos, where locals call it the black rock. Also it was not explicitly confirmed cannibal has died. After Dance of The Dragons , the whereabouts of riderless dragons were unknown.
He let her go and went toward the table nearby. Her gaze shifted to the table as well, where a map of Westeros lay spread out. Skagos was marked with a large circle. She also noticed a large, ancient horn in the room, covered in Valyrian inscriptions. - Stoned_Daoist_66630dコメント
Cannibal?
He let her go and went toward the table nearby. Her gaze shifted to the table as well, where a map of Westeros lay spread out. Skagos was marked with a large circle. She also noticed a large, ancient horn in the room, covered in Valyrian inscriptions. - Stoned_Daoist_66630dコメント
Thanks for the update
It was a wreath he had specially made for Amon. - Stoned_Daoist_66630dコメント
*Medici...Not Megose
この段落は削除されました。 - Stoned_Daoist_66630dに返信 Adamo_Amet
Alright I can go with that but still I don't want the system to be known or shared by anyone other than Naruto. Still this is your fic, you are the Author, you can do whatever you want, I will still follow this fic regardless of your choice. But please don't rewrite this fic anymore, it's already the 3rd(or maybe 4th) version of rewrite.
Should Naruto reveal his system to Hinata and Tenten? - Stoned_Daoist_66630dコメント
No...maybe to Hinata but definitely not Tenten...Tenten already shows that she is a gold-digger by taking that deed from Naruto.
Should Naruto reveal his system to Hinata and Tenten? - Stoned_Daoist_66630dコメント
No
Should Naruto reveal his system to Hinata and Tenten? - Stoned_Daoist_6661mthコメント
I think Bleach's Kido and Hado's power systems will go well along with Uzumaki's fuinjutsu, ninjutsu and Kekkaijutsu as they are more likely spell for Way of Binding(For Fuinjutsu or Juinjutsu) and Way of Destruction(For elemental ninjutsu) as well as some Space-Time forbidden barrier spell(Kekkaijutsu) Hachimon created.
- Give me your best ideas. - Stoned_Daoist_6661mthコメント"This isn't a false memory but the real past…"
- Stoned_Daoist_6661mthに返信 Norf
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Their first opponent for the round of 32 was Bayer Leverkusen, and they would be a tough nut to crack for sure. - Stoned_Daoist_6661mthコメントCh 15 Power system
- Stoned_Daoist_6661mthに返信 Dragon_7454
Will be waiting eagerly.
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel? - Stoned_Daoist_6661mthに返信 Dragon_7454
Yeah and also you have the option of making auxiliary chapter of glossary where you can update the necessary information as you go through the chapter/volume that way readers don't have to read a infodump. Anyway that's just my suggestion, keep up the good work.
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel? - Stoned_Daoist_6661mthに返信 Stoned_Daoist_666
Another thing you should focus is to make the main character have a proper in-depth background so that he has a strong ambition for power.., Readers won't relate with the MC if he doesn't have any proper motivation to become stronger, I say this because from what I read this novel seems to have a power fantasy thing based on MC getting a System that can copy power. Although I must say you did a good job on the MC's personality and character as he is very likeable because of his scheming and shrewd personality.
So tell me guys should I revise the chapters and edit them to increase the quality and sort out a few things reuploading the novel?